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The rules for FearClan could be the OPPOSITE of those in ThunderClan, etc... For example, No Medicine Cats are allowed to have a mate or kits... but that rule could be "Medicine Cats MUST have had a mate and kits to become a true medicine cat" or how warriors CAN have a mate and kits.... maybe the warriors in FearClan aren't allowed until they are SENIOR WARRIORS so they can focus on defending the clan. (Just suggestions ;3 But plz give me at LEAST half-credit...) AND HERE... Name: BlackDeath Age: 26 Moons Gender: Female | She-cat Ring: High-Cats Rank: Head-Guard Looks: Ref1 | Ref2 Perso: You can probably infer by her Backstory. Backstory: Here's some simple: Blackdeath. That's her literal name..used to be Blackkit, chosen by her mother, because of her simple black pelt. But her previous leader began to fear her because of how ruthless and psychotic she was as an apprentice. In total, she's killed about 60 cats in battle and helped earn her previous clan complete victory, therefore gaining her suffix "Death" as a warrior, and also because her ancestors was there during the plague and gave birth to generations of cats that were accused of spreading the plague... Through her looks, she's also charmed many-a toms but left them all. She has never believed they'd like her once they found out what her emotional traits were like. But over that, she's also gain some form of satisfaction through their fear of her. Powers (I can say no to these): It's pretty simple. She's just powerfully strong and tough. Power is literally her power...she could kill over 100 cats(yes the 3 digits) and not feel a decency of weariness. (If Trainee) What will you become?: N/A (If Mentor) Who will you train?: Doesn't necessarily plan on having an apprentice. Would you rebel?: Most likely---no. She definitely enjoys being feared. Love Interest?: HOPEFULLY CLAWSTAR OR SCARNOSE <33 She likes their looks. Questions: Um...Could you possibly consider my plot below? Other: Beloooooow... | Ideas: I was thinking since Blackdeath has been through many loves, Scarnose or Clawstar could've heard about it, but still secretly had feelings for Blackdeath. Blackdeath considers going on an outing(date) with them both to dip her toe in the water.... She gets scared and runs off, claiming she doesn't truly love EITHER of them... but Clawstar and Scarnose run after her...and say that they know her past, and ask Blackdeath to choose. Blackdeath chooses Scarnose, afraid that if she chose Clawstar..Scarnose would somehow convince Clawstar that she chose him for power... Once Blackdeath chooses Scarnose, Clawstar(MAYBE......) kills Scarnose out of anger, and to prove his love for Blackdeath. |
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1 (OPTIONAL): Name. Blackdeath is ok, but normally the best guards (And sometimes the mediocre ones!) get -bite as their suffix. Plus, Black Death is a kind of disease. 2: Backstory. I keep forgetting to mention it, but FearClan isn't a very new Clan. It's been around at least 9-18 lifetimes (Cause the Clan has forgotten their history.) and BaneClan dominated the forest/lake at least 9 lifetimes before that. Plus, killing 60 cats is too OP. And btw there was no plague. 3: Powers. Too OP, but change it to 25 or lower and it's fine 4: Plot. It's fine, but although they sometimes have a sibling rivalry, they would almost never hurt each other (Unless one of them betrays the Clan, or during training) As for the code, |
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The rest I can most certainly deal with... I'll do 25 at the least, if it allows me to join.... And I'll accept Blackbite.. :) BUT I'M MAKING A CHARACTER NAMED DEATH THAT STAY "DEATH" EVEN AS THE BEST HEAD GUARD! (If I may) |
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(Oh wait. I forgot a couple things -_-) 1: The Rank. There's already a Head Guard, Redbite. Maybe you can have her kill him (as he isn't necessary to the plot), but he's good friends with Graybite, so the HRs won't like it if you kill him. I'll (Most Likely) have the Rebellion kill him, but that won't happen for a while. 2 (OPTIONAL): The Ring. Normally the better Guards go to the lower Rings, but get the same kind of food as the Ring they are from. |
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1. Blackbite could kill Redbite out of him looking like one of her many ex's? But I don't think anyone would find out(and even if they do--they would find out within about 4-5 weeks...) because she can make an excuse within the unsheathing of a cat's claws. 2. I'd do the Ring thing lol She doesn't really care about other's feelings unless it's her love interests or her V V V Best friends! And... Again.. HER ANCESTORS were in the plague and it goes from generation to generation of thinking black cats were the cause of the plague, etc etc... |
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Trust me, she'll do any punishments towards the Mud-Cats.... |
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(Also, in response to the edited parts of your posts: http://www.warriorcatsonline.com/for...375#post256375 "BUT I'M MAKING A CHARACTER NAMED DEATH THAT STAY "DEATH" EVEN AS THE BEST HEAD GUARD! (If I may)" Maybe. http://www.warriorcatsonline.com/for...402#post256402 "And... Again.. HER ANCESTORS were in the plague and it goes from generation to generation of thinking black cats were the cause of the plague, etc etc..." No cat in FearClan (YET) believes that. But maybe someone makes a cat that believes that.) |
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