[Leaf_tail]

Originally Posted by Silvershadow

Silverheart faced the tom and said "You need a bit more work in swift attacks. You have a good stance, but need to work on how you place yourself- the way you stand for your next attack."

Brokencreek bristled. Based your wounds, it seems like my attack was just fine--! But he didn't dare say that out loud. "Fine," he said through clenched teeth. "I'll work on that."