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Old November 19th, 2017, 12:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Akari View Post
Alright, it sure does. Now, you also said “You’ll be fine, darling. It’s probably just pregnancy sickness." As far as I'm aware, there is no such thing. If it is in the morning, I Believe the correct term is "Morning Sickness." Then again, in their Situation, I Doubt there is such a thing as morning.
Gonna disagree with this for a moment. He doesn't know what is wrong with her. When you're pregnant you tend to get sick a lot. I think he's just assuming it has something to do with her being Pregnant
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