[Mayflower]

Originally Posted by Myik

Akari picked out one thing, but it's not anything I can really suggest? I just see a few sentences with no spaces, but it seems like you have that under control since almost all of them are fixed.
I get the timeline, and I see it but still, I would just like to see them together more. Talking more and falling in love. Back then they still did that, the only true reason people got married quickly was because they died quickly. But, I see how you wanted it to be shorter.

I'll work on that if I can after the main plot is finished ^^

i'm only halfway done though this is like the climax