[ponyapan]

Nightwhisker took a deep breath.
"First, I should tell you some basics about fighting, then maybe teach you a few of the basic moves as well." Nightwhisker finally meowed.
Rainpaw sat down and nodded.
"Well, first of all, you make it too obvious for the enemy to see where you're aiming. Try confusing the enemy by doing another attack first, or at least don't look too long where you are aiming."Nightwhisker began.
"Second of all, it takes a bit too long for you to get into position and think.
In battle, the enemy won't wait, and they will know what to do if they see your position." He continued. Rainpaw gave a nod, but he had a hurt look in his eye.
"But that is to be expected, you have never done this before. When we have trained a bit it will come naturally."Nightwhisker encouraged.
Rainpaw looked a bit happier at the words.
"So, maybe I could show you how to combine a pounce with a jump? Doing a combo of attacks is more affective. But first, let me see your defensive position."