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Old May 20th, 2017, 12:58 PM
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Default Re: ThunderClan | ShadowClan Border

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Originally Posted by Stormfeather View Post
Willowclaw whisked his tail back and screeched as Thrushwing clawed his hindquarters. He backflipped over the other tom and aimed to score his claws down the cat's flank.
Jaystorm hissed as one paw connected. The pretty she-cat, now hostile, leaped for Mapleleaf's back.
Could you make willowclaw's attacks more realistic?a backflip is likely to happen, but the attack thrushwing just gave, should have willowclaw loose balance and is less likely to do a back flip.)

Thrushwing jumped forward, dodging the claws and spun around, swiping his own claws multiple times at willowclaw.

Mapleleaf could only crouch, because of jaystorm's fast movement of the leap, and hope for the best.
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