[occultation]

 

Originally Posted by Desert Rain Frog

Hmm..
Brief Description Of Plot: Not Knowing His Father Died Trying To Join RiverClan, He Goes To Join Him. It Will Take Him Days To Travel From His Barn To RiverClan, But He's Not Sure What To Do To Try Joining, March Right In, Or Wait On The Border? He Wait, And Meets A Patrol(Hopefully) And It Goes On From There.

So I need a more comprehensive plot than this. Please take a look at this post as an example of what I'm looking for. Note that this is just a reference; you can go with whatever plot you want, but I'm looking for something that actually has some complexity to it and actually involves RC.

 

Originally Posted by Volewing<3

.// Hello! I'm new to RPing, and I would like to start at my favorite clan if possible! I would love any rank, whatever is best to whoever chooses, though a kit would be preferred. Although I would really like a clan name with the suffix and/or prefix of: Otter-/-otter, Stream-/-stream, Whisker-/-whisker, or Misty-/-misty. Thank you! \\.

{Aliray}

Lonesome she-cat. Fairly small, her little ribs showing from under her dangling, messy, ginger pelt. She looks terrible, her fur matted and ruffled. Her once beautiful emerald eyes are tired, she looks like she won't last less than half a moon.

She/Her

Wants to join because she has already lost every bit of people she knew, and wishes to start again before she joins StarClan. She can't even remember where she came from; only vivid dreams.

Hi! If you want to join as a Clan cat straight away, you can go ahead and submit your cat to the allegiances. Check out the Newbie Guide under Site Information for instructions on how to do that. If you want to attempt to join as an outsider, please fill out the form on the first post of this thread!

 

Originally Posted by Hollyheart of thunder

Outsider requesting to join
Name- Algae
Gender-Tom
Queen expecting or nursing or kit?- no
Reason for joining- Has seen Riverclan fishing, and has debated approaching them, since he is an excellent fisher.
Brief description of the plot- Uhhh... I don't know what this means, but if it means how he introduces himself, then here it is:
Algae once again found himself hidden in the reeds, looking at the strange group of cats. Why hunt with other cats? he thought. It's much easier to do it alone. Much less noise and lower chance of being seen. Algae debated whether or not to go out and teach these cats how to 'properly' hunt fish. His tail twitched, disturbing the reeds. The cats looked at him. Fox dung. If they see me- He never got to finish the thought. One of the cats moved the reeds apart and saw him. "(enter cat speech and/or reaction)" (If told to follow, Algae will follow the cats back to camp. If told to leave, Algae will refuse, and demand to see their home, claiming he wants to join. If fight breaks out, Algae fights back, wounding the cat. Seeing the damage he did to the wounded cat, he would offer to help. If wounded cat accepts help, Algae is led (hopefully) to camp, where he meets the medicine cat and the leader.)
Rank request- Warrior
New name request (optional)- Algaetail
Mention me- @Occultation, @Starry
Additional- Dark brown tabby with lighter brown stripes

Hey! So I need an actual plot, not a description of how this cat will go about joining the Clan. The plot should have some complexity to it, and should involve RiverClan in some way. If you want an example, check out the post I linked higher up in this reply.

 

Originally Posted by oakcrane

Name: Onyx
Gender: Male
Is your character a kit or an expecting queen?: No
Reason for Joining: Badly injured hind leg
Brief description of the plot: He wandered into Riverclan territory seeking help and was found by a patrol.
Rank Request: Warrior
New Name Request (optional):
Mention Me: ( @occultation @starry )
Appearance: A large long-muzzled black cat with faint rosettes and deep reddish/amber eyes.

Hi! I need a more complex plot than this. Feel free to check out the post I linked higher up in this reply for an example of the type of plot I'm looking for.