[wren]

Originally Posted by .:Blue Wishes:.

(( this is going to be short, i’m probably going to pass out any minute ))

Rosepaw watched Daisyshade, nodding, though questions were building in his mind. How could fish sense vibrations? What about tree and bush shadows? He kept his mouth shut, not wanting to be a nuisance. Focusing on the way Daisyshade looked, he narrowed his eyes before finally understanding a bit more then he had. Before he was finished really registering everything, Daisy was already asking him to try to stand the way she was. Rose awkwardly tried to shift his weight, shaking a bit. How did they do this? Rose felt as though he was going to fall, not noticing he was shifting his weight to his side, which wasn’t that useful. Trying to use his tail to steady himself, he was a flailing mess for maybe 10 seconds, before finally falling over, his pelt rushing with heat as he struggled to look away from his paws. Pushing himself upright again, he once again tried it, now embarrassed enough so that he couldn’t meet eye contact with Daisy.

[[ Sleep c: ]]

Daisyshade flinched seeing how distorted his movement was, the way he awkwardly leaned to far to the left. Though he kept trying to straighten himself she found it hard to focus on not criticize him too quick, she knew rosepaw was trying to correct themselves knowing what they were doing wrong. Still it was hard not to comment because it had been worked so easily into her system it was automatic every time she approached the river. Though as she was caught in her thoughts the small tom tumbled to the side succumbing to his heavy lean. She stood up her ears perked suddenly standing up quickly to catch him, seeing he was ok the she cats whiskers twitched in amusement and she sat back again in relief. She allowed him to straighten out without criticing him or speaking, than she stood and moved around his rear end. Thinking back to her apprenticeship and know how tough mastering anything was she let out a deep purr of amusement. She used her tail to stagger his hind legs the one put farther back behind the other, so he looked like he was in half walking motion. She stepped back and watched the way his body was now fully staggered. Other than balence his from was perfect. She had never seen such an arrow dynamic hunting crouch and a smile spread across her maw “Rosepaw” she said looking at him with a pride within her eyes. She was slightly unnerved by his silence but it would take time to work up the courage to get comfortable. Your deputy after all. her ears pinned at the thought your just like anybody else mousebrain. Just like any old warrior. she straightened up “that’s perfect rosepaw, better than mine” she commented her smile spreading. Perhaps showing off her apprentices one day would be her third greatest joy, after the kits and firstly tumblestep. Of course. “always remember to stagger your hind legs for extra balence, some of the greatest hunters use their tails and hind legs to their advantage. With practice you seem like you’d make a great hunter” she mused.