[The Mad Katter]

Ok, so I'm writing poems for each of my friends, and I just finished one for one of my friends. I call her 'Rain Child' because she hates the rain. Anyway, I'd like some advice on this poem:


Rain Child

Check the time,
Where did it all go?
Time doesn’t exist,
When hanging out with you

Laughing,
You never mind my dirty jokes
And my light-hearted teasing is fine here
Especially when talking about your crush

Remember when we were walking to the bus,
Out in the rain that you hate
And I gave you the nickname,
Rain Child?

Well, here we are, Rain Child
With a friendship that can weather any storm
That comes our way