December 6th, 2017, 07:02 AM
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Re: I need some advice (Poem)
@ The Mad Katter (clever)
I don’t now know if you still want advice on this or not but here goes.
I like it and I know poetry has many different rules for writing and it allows the poet to experiment with many different forms and styles of speech. As I was reading I can normally make a rhythm fit but I don’t know if it’s just my brain at 8:00 in the morning or what but I can’t seem to find one. Also, when it says “With a friendship that can weather any storm...” I’m not sure if you used the wrong “weather” or if you were making a pun or something but it should be “whether” (unless you were making a pun, then very clever!)
Sincerly,
ScarredSecrets~
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Last edited by SacredMadness; December 6th, 2017 at 07:03 AM.
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