In need of tips for my Oc's!

**Courage** · #1 April 26th, 2022, 04:43 PM

So I have a chairichter that im not realy shure how to make intresing. She has a personality almost exactly like Firestar and im realy not sshure how to make her intresing.

**Bean** · #2 April 26th, 2022, 04:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Forestheart Flower

So I have a chairichter that im not realy shure how to make intresing. She has a personality almost exactly like Firestar and im realy not sshure how to make her intresing.

I could make u another one for free!

**stag** · #3 April 26th, 2022, 04:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Forestheart Flower

So I have a chairichter that im not realy shure how to make intresing. She has a personality almost exactly like Firestar and im realy not sshure how to make her intresing.

Give them some flaws,no cat is perfect. Flesh out this character development over a period of time while role playing or just give them a reason to act this way?

**Courage** · #4 April 26th, 2022, 04:51 PM

ty! that helped! @Leo!

**stag** · #5 April 26th, 2022, 04:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Forestheart Flower

ty! that helped! @Leo!

No problem,LMK (let me know) if you need anything like this again!

**alaskaa** · #6 April 28th, 2022, 06:00 AM

@Forestheart Flower

1. Give them an actual persobality! Not 'shy quiet, smart' but some more traits as well. Try to also throw in neutral and negative traits.
2. Give your charrie strengths and weaknesses. They can be dedicated, loyal and the model warrior, but they should also have flaws. Are they Impulsive? Reckless? Biased towards ThunderClan?
3. Give them some history. Seriously. Backstory is pretty important, it influences your character. Like if a cat loved some other cat but the other cat rejected them, they could believe that love brings pain and that they'll never fall for someome again.

aaaand yeah, that's all that I can think of But the main thing is to flesh out your character by actually roleplaying them. In your posts, put effort and time into it. I don't do that all the time because I'm lazy ssshhh

**Courage** · #7 April 28th, 2022, 04:25 PM

thanks for the tips! One more quetion, I need some ideas of what flaws t give my charicter, ones exited about almost everything, and ones basicly Squerrelflight/Firestar... @Iris @Leo!