that looks really good! one suggestion I would make is that the lashes on the upper eyelid could be a bit longer. even as a masculine eye they still have long lashes. so they could curl up and out from the eye a bit more. then possibly if you wanted more detail you could add some darker lines in the sclera (the white part) which would be like the red lines you get in your eyes. the more tired you are, the more you have and if you've been staring at an electronic screen for long periods of time, or reading or whatever it would have more, coming closer to looking bloodshot. but the lines would just add some small detailing and could potentially tell what's been going on for the character. oh and back on the lashes, this time the bottom. on the far right corner of the eye, the lashes look like little upside down 'v's. you could add in some lighter lashes to just break it up a little, thugh not too many since there are normally fewer lashes on the bottom.
other than that it looks SUPER good and really realistic
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