ShadeClan

[SnowFall(RosePetal)]

[ QUOTE=Bram246;3388][ QUOTE=SnowFall(RosePetal);3380] @Bram246 You're RP Example was only two mere sentences. One of which doesn't describe anything. I clearly stated "3-4 sentences" I'm sorry, but I cannot accepted this.

@Shadomaru Accepted~

@☯Lilacwood Please choose another RP Example that's slightly longer, if you can?

@SIlverheart_the_Warrior You're RP Example has typos in it. Please remember to proofread.

@Shadow This is a FanClan. You're character(And character RP Example) Are taking place in the real Warriors world. This is unacceptable.[/QUOTE]

Can I rewrite the sentences or no?[/QUOTE]
@Bram246 No.

[Abstracted Dog]

I edited my sentences, using a different character, which I hope is okay.

[Rivergold]

Name: Sunpaw
Age: 8 moons
Gender: female
Looks: http://desktop-wallpapers.net/wallpa..._wallpaper.jpg
Personalitly: bold and outspoken.
RP Example(3-4 sentences!): Sunpaw gave an almost inaudible purr as she stalked her prey, eyes bright with excitement. Her pawsteps were silent, her scent downwind, her quarry unknowing. Perfect. With a triumphant yowl she leapt at her mentor's shoulders, knocking him/her to the floor of the training area. "Did I do good?"
Other: She needs a mentor
Questions?:

[SnowFall(RosePetal)]

@RivergoldAccepted~ Owlfeather needs some help anyway :3

@☯Lilacwood Accepted~

[SIlverheart_the_Warrior]

sorry about typos

[Rivergold]

(Who is Owlfeather?)

[SnowFall(RosePetal)]

[ QUOTE=Rivergold;3632](Who is Owlfeather?)[/QUOTE]

The Medicine Cat.

[Rivergold]

okie then

[Shadow]

So I'm guessing i out? Even though I fixed my form?

[SnowFall(RosePetal)]

[ QUOTE=Shadow;3892]So I'm guessing i out? Even though I fixed my form?[/QUOTE]
Yes.