ThunderClan Territory

[Wintersun]

Originally Posted by QueenCocaHead

" You too! That was a good pounce!" Stagpaw said

"Are you sure? I sure theres somthing I can work on. Theres ALWAYS something you can work on. Right?" She asked.

[Willie Warf]

Originally Posted by Wintersun

"Are you sure? I sure there's something I can work on. Theres ALWAYS something you can work on. Right?" She asked.

" Well...........................Maybe, not swishing your tail around when you're waiting for the prey? Also, I noticed that your crouch is really low, Unnessesarly low. If you had raised yourself a bit higher you would have had the same amount of power in the pounce but your legs would hurt a lot less. That's all I saw really"

[Wintersun]

Originally Posted by QueenCocaHead

" Well...........................Maybe, not swishing your tail around when you're waiting for the prey? Also, I noticed that your crouch is really low, Unnessesarly low. If you had raised yourself a bit higher you would have had the same amount of power in the pounce but your legs would hurt a lot less. That's all I saw really"

"Ok!"She meowed, "Thanks for the advice, though im sure my mentor could find fault." She joked.

[Silverfur & Co]

Originally Posted by MooingPanda

Stormfang moved toward the fox and tried to find a solid place to grab hold. As Silverdust shifted it, he manuevered his broad shoulder underneath it's shoulder, the fox suspended between them.

Silverdust carried it and padded toward a netrual area to deposit the fox as they walked together. As the both of them carried it she sighed lost in thought.

[Willie Warf]

Originally Posted by Wintersun

"Ok!"She meowed, "Thanks for the advice, though im sure my mentor could find fault." She joked.

"Hehe sorry" He said

[Kunaisoul]

Originally Posted by Topaztaill

~Silverwave~

She snorted, as she backed away from the furious fox. "Indeed, but let's chase it out first!"She unsheathed her claws again, a grin forming on her face. "I am quite enjoying this!"
The silver tabby hissed, and launched herself at the fox, her teeth bared. Silverwave snapped down on it's tail, and it whined, swinging around and biting her leg. She yowled, stumbling back with her ears pinned back.
Her blood splattered the ground. Though it wasn't a very deep wound, it had some serious damage.
She winced, limping backwards to a tree and watching from the shadows, hoping for a moment to pounce.

He grabbed it’s tail, and bit it. The damaged fox fan away. “We did it..” Flyheart huffed.

[Kunaisoul]

Originally Posted by Wintersun

Dawnpaw was thinking about her crouch, when she smelled something different, something told her that it was bad and she got nervous. "S-softshadow? W-what is that?" She asked. @Kunaiskrill

“It’s a badger.” He growled. “Stand your ground! Show it no mercy. Defend yourself, use your size against it!” He leaped at the badger, leaping onto it’s back and dug his claws into its back.

[Topaz]

Originally Posted by Kunaiskrill

He grabbed it’s tail, and bit it. The damaged fox fan away. “We did it..” Flyheart huffed.

~Silverwave~

“Well, then, lay us get back.” She turned and trotted back to the camp.


(Should I post in the leader’s den?

[Kunaisoul]

Originally Posted by Topaztaill

~Silverwave~

“Well, then, lay us get back.” She turned and trotted back to the camp.


(Should I post in the leader’s den?

Sure, flyheart can be with her ))

[Topaz]

Originally Posted by Kunaiskrill

Sure, flyheart can be with her ))

(Okay! I'll post later)