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nocturnal November 6th, 2020 10:10 AM

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[ @Elementals ]

The black ghost tabby padded alongside his apprentice as the terrain transformed from towering pines to precarious faults. He paused for a second, seeing a pebble, and proceeded to kick at the small object, sending it flying over the ledge. Cautiously, Fallenheart's ears swiveled. Moments passed. He heard a crack, and his eyes widened in concern. If someone were to fall, then it would be a long way down.

He hastened to catch up with Peacepaw, who seemed to have intelligently decided to stay away from the edge. Smiling reassuringly at the younger feline, he meowed, "Before we get started, I suppose we should get to know each other first. I'm Fallenheart, as you know. I can't say that I'll be the best mentor ever, but I'm planning on leaving, if you know what I mean." He gestured with his paw for his apprentice to speak.

Dovey November 6th, 2020 10:28 AM

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// @Saltyteardrops
Crowpaw smiled, he was better than his mentor. No doubt He thought. Quickly, he looked around. His eye's weren't the best, he could say that again. But he desided to follow his mentor's idea, and hop into the shadows where only a amazing eye could see. Swiftly and silently, Crowpaw began moving in the shadows, till he saw his mentor. Quicly ducking behind a bush, he waited for his mentor to come by.

Elementals November 6th, 2020 10:52 AM

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~Peacepaw of SHC~

The apprentice greeted his mentor with a dip of his head while listening carefully to his mentor. Hopefully he was able to learn a few more things from Fallenheart so that he wouldn't be the burden if there were to be trouble in the clan on day. He nodded his head with understanding as they said things really honestly which Peacepaw was grateful for. It was understandable that many cats either come or go because that was life. Something might have called out to them in the wild but some cats in the wild or Twolegplace might have felt a calling to the clans.

"Peacepaw say thank you for your honesty, no cat is a natural prodigy! Peacepaw wishes to learn as much from Fallenheart, before the time they part," he responded to his mentor with his usual rhyme talk.

{ @bmkmb }

nykyrian November 6th, 2020 08:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Daisy the Icewing (Post 842243)
// @Saltyteardrops
Crowpaw smiled, he was better than his mentor. No doubt He thought. Quickly, he looked around. His eye's weren't the best, he could say that again. But he desided to follow his mentor's idea, and hop into the shadows where only a amazing eye could see. Swiftly and silently, Crowpaw began moving in the shadows, till he saw his mentor. Quicly ducking behind a bush, he waited for his mentor to come by.

Acornpelt looked around, curious to where her apprentice was. The tabby looked around, wanting to find him. That's what he wants me to do she realized. So instead she did the opposite, she sat down waiting for Crowpaw to come to her.

Dovey November 6th, 2020 09:58 PM

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// @Saltyteardrops

Smart.. But stupid. Crowpaw, quietly slid out of the cliffs, going to a forest, where he roamed unheard, and came behind her. Quickly jumping, he hoped to hit her on the back, near the neck.

Rani November 7th, 2020 12:19 AM

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The first kick didnt manage to completely move her even if it winded her though the second one did dislodge her moving the warrior enough for Shrewpaw to stand. "Good job." She wheezed having to dip her head for a few moments to regain her composure though she waved a reassuring tail to make sure the apprentice knew she wasnt mad or too hurt. "When you're pinned on your back and that doesn't work then there is also another move you can do as a last result. When youre stuck that way your claws and fangs are open and usually the other cat is trying to seriously hurt you so if you're forced to, go for the throat. I dont usually approve of killing blows but better you live then your foe if pushed." With one final cough the warrior finally caught her breath again.

"Next is when you're pinned on your belly." She swiped a paw at Shrewpaws legs suddenly looking to knock him down without warning. If he dodged it was a good show of how skilled he really was if he didnt he'd just end up pinned like he was going to be anyway.

@gs29513

gs29513 November 8th, 2020 01:32 PM

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(Queen of the pinnepeds-BEAUTIFUL!)
Pleased that he had gotten Adderfang off, Shrewpaw was on his feet, momentarily worried that he had actually hurt the warrior. He REALLY didn't want to hurt someone from his clan, especially not if they were helping him learn battle moves for beating Dawnstar. As she talked about KILLING, he shuddered, hoping HE never had any reason to do that. The blood, all the grossness.......it must be horrible! And to kill a cat, end their life, he didn't even want to think about it anymore. So he was more than ready for the next move, resisting the urge to try and dodge the swinging paw and plopping to the ground willingly, on his front as requested. In an attempt to be prepared, he tucked his paws under him, out of the way so they weren't stepped on. @Rani

Rani November 9th, 2020 06:07 PM

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Adderfang stepped her front paws onto Shrewpaws shoulders pinning him in place. "Now you dont get pinned like this often as its harder for an opponent to accomplish but it means when others are pinned like this generally they have no clue how to get out but thrashing, which wastes energy. Theres actually an easier way. Plant your paws on the ground and push up rolling your shoulders as you do. Like a wave motion or the motion you use when youre working out a kink in your back just roll them one after another, your attackers paws will slip right off. This may take a bit to get the motion right but keep trying Ill just stand here." Adderfang instructed trying to not hurt the apprentice by putting all of her bulky body weight onto him. She was big and mainly thick muscle and if she tried to keep him pinned the learner wasn't likely moving and even now using all her body weight on someone just trying out the techniques would be bad. Still after this they could move on to a practice spar and she could teach him some special attack moves during that, kinda a learn while you go thing which could be fun.

@gs29513 (hehe thanks its a great play on words kinda cuz rani means queen and pinnipeds are my constant obsession/my major focus)

Rani November 10th, 2020 08:23 AM

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Shrikepaw frowned considering his mentors words head cocking back and forth unconsciously as he thought over the ideas, a rare honest sign of his youth. It all seemed like good advice but implementing it would be the hard part, the tom had no doubt he was going to take a few hits in the process. He was more afraid than he'd like admit of that. Not so much because of the potential impact attached but because of the lingering worry that Windstrike, seeing an opportunity, would pull claws on the apprentice and make it a blow he wouldn't be able to take. All warriors he'd learnt from before had been of that kind and his mentor hadn't really done much to prove he was any different only fuelling what was becoming an unhealthy paranoia of everyone but Shrikepaws own sister. A reasonable one knowing shadowclan and his usual training but one that would hold him back in this learning stage.

Right he wasn't hesitating this time, Shrikepaw didn't waste a single second as he darted forward ducking low and sliding as if to batter his stomach before leaping at the last second. Jumping in a smooth arch his paws went wide trying to grip at the warrior firmly back paws lifting off of the ground to batter at Windstrikes side while he clung. He'd tried this attack before on Shrewpaw and it worked well while it lasted, Shrikepaw was small enough that he could easily hold himself on to someone and being stuck so firmly onto someones side made him harder to hit and near impossible to bite. It was simple, body tucked in close to his foe front paws reached around to get a firm grip and tail curled out of the war around a leg he made himself as small as possible back paws kicking at an open stomach, it was difficult without claws but defiantly not impossible. As long as he wasn't tossed off the small tom could do a lot of damage with his free back paws while his opponent was reeling, cats rarely knew what to do when finding an unwanted clinging burr that refused to let go and that confusion afforded the opportunist a lot of room to work. He had been foiled by the other apprentice flopping over and squishing him sure but the tom had made plans to avoid that this time.

Even if the move failed Shrikepaw was prepared to take Windstrikes advice and move with whatever counter attack the warrior threw at him even it was more on the fly than the young tom perhaps preferred. Adaptability in battle, he could learn that right?

@Pepperkins

gs29513 November 10th, 2020 09:05 AM

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Originally Posted by Rani (Post 844232)
Adderfang stepped her front paws onto Shrewpaws shoulders pinning him in place. "Now you dont get pinned like this often as its harder for an opponent to accomplish but it means when others are pinned like this generally they have no clue how to get out but thrashing, which wastes energy. Theres actually an easier way. Plant your paws on the ground and push up rolling your shoulders as you do. Like a wave motion or the motion you use when youre working out a kink in your back just roll them one after another, your attackers paws will slip right off. This may take a bit to get the motion right but keep trying Ill just stand here." Adderfang instructed trying to not hurt the apprentice by putting all of her bulky body weight onto him. She was big and mainly thick muscle and if she tried to keep him pinned the learner wasn't likely moving and even now using all her body weight on someone just trying out the techniques would be bad. Still after this they could move on to a practice spar and she could teach him some special attack moves during that, kinda a learn while you go thing which could be fun.

@gs29513 (hehe thanks its a great play on words kinda cuz rani means queen and pinnipeds are my constant obsession/my major focus)

(It's awesome! I didn't know Rani meant queen, but I adore pinnipeds too! So good at swimming!)
Listening to Adderfang's explanation of how he should push up and roll his shoulders, and about how thrashing didn't really work, Shrewpaw wiggled his shoulders experimentally. There might be one obvious flaw with this plan, when the cat pinning you was about twice as heavy as you were, but he might as well give it a shot. Maybe he'd get really lucky and only get sat on by a tiny apprentice? Bending his front legs under is chest, he pushed up in what he thought was a fairly sudden motion, except Adderfang weighted A LOT. Turning his really fast push up into more of shakey, staggery stretch. Oops. He'd have to work on getting stronger if he was actually going to pull this one off quickly. Still, he was now almost halfway up, so he tried to roll his shoulders, thinking wave. HE WAS A WAVE! HE WAS A WAVE! And repeating that to himself over and over did help, his motion becoming a bit more fluid, although he was fairly certain Adderfang was still up there, judging by how much his legs were shaking, holding up the weight. So, not wanting to have to flop back down and try again, the small apprentice dropped his left shoulder, hoping she would just.....skid off. Although that might not work. He wasn't sure what he was supposed to do when his opponent weighed about a ton, but he was giving it a shot. @Rani

Pepperkins November 13th, 2020 07:52 AM

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Windstrike
[ @Rani ]

Windstrike watched as the apprentice seemingly went for his underfur, prepared to send him flying below him, until being thrown off by him pouncing at his side. It knocked him off balance for a moment as he struggled to turn towards the tom clinging to his side, barely avoiding getting kicked in the face. This was actually really resourceful, because of his small size it was practically like being backed up against a cliffside, unable to turn and run. All he could do at the moment was throw paws in his general direction, hoping to hit him at least once to knock him off before his eyes flew open in realization.

Rolling over as if getting comfortable in some moss, the tom's smirk returned to his face as he hoped to squash the smaller feline under his weight so he'd let go at least. If he got lucky, he could quickly flip over and pin the apprentice to get the upper hand. It was all about thinking ahead, also he absolutely despised how exposed his underside was at this moment. If Shrikepaw was smart enough to escape from under him he could easily land a blow if he wasn't up fast enough. Luckily, he wasn't named Windstrike for just any reason. Attempting to force the apprentice to release his pelt, he wriggled a bit, trying not to come too close to the edge of the cliff, though it would be quite funny to watch the tom go tumbling down the side.

"You're stuck under a warrior, what do you do? Can't be suffocated down there, can you?"

[ Sorry so short! Working on training with 3 different apprentices haha ]

vellichor November 13th, 2020 01:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Arie (Post 838891)



He had lost his spark. That very much could be observed through the silence, and the drag of his paws on the ground - and the lack of a snarky comment. To some extent it worried the warrior, the apprentice had an attitude, and she did miss it. Moving over slightly she curled her tail around him, and caught his head stretched towards the sky. Oh. He was worried about the bird. Not caring about how she probably shouldn't be doing this at a training ground, Doetuft moved and proceeded to embrace her apprentice in a hug, brief however it may be, but it was there to show he was not alone with whatever he was dealing with. "If you... wish to talk... about what... happened... or just... talk, we can... do so after... training." Not right now... she needed to teach him how to defend himself so that such a thing as what happened likely would not happen again, or at least so that the likeliness that he would lose an eye would not happen. "We're going... to be working... on the offensive. I want... you to attack... me. Come.. at me... Buzzard."

Buzzardpaw
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He felt as if he couldn't shift his gaze from the sky. He couldn't... or else. WHich is why the feeling of his mentor's tail around him startled him. It startled him so much that he jumped into the air and yelped. Oh, oh Stars. That was... embarrassing. With another quick glance at the cloudy sky, he spoke. Well, stuttered, "I, I'm--!" he couldn't even get two words out before the tabby cat pulled him into a hug. He didn't know what was going on until she began to let go. Her embrace, though a little bristly, had felt nice... but he didn't want to be clingy or anything. So, regretfully, he stepped back as Doetuft did. And now,, attack her? Um, uh. O...kay. WIth a nod and one last desperate glance upward, he leapt forward. He was aiming for her side, maybe even to knowck her over. Or something. He... didn't know.

Arie November 14th, 2020 12:08 AM

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-- @elysian --

He was acting more strange than he usually did and Doetuft couldn't exactly place what it was that unnerved her apprentice so much. Well the hug had unnerved him, she was aware of that but what else she didn't know, but what she did know was that he did want to talk to her after this training and well... she wanted to go over it with him too. It was vital to talk about these things and they'd never gotten an actual opportunity to do so. So she was going to take that as soon as she'd worked him up and through and, of course, kicked his ass a few times. He was going to face Dawnstar eventually but that would hopefully be in a long while first. It was hard to work the body while the mind was somewhere else, she knew that herself all too well. Yet squaring her shoulders, she listened to his pawsteps and managed to step to the side avoiding him, and aiming to lift a paw up that would proceed to send him tumbling over and into the sand. "Faster... Buzzardpaw... faster." He had to focus on his ability to react, it could save his life potentially.

Pluto November 16th, 2020 04:25 PM

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[ @Creeped Out | @Wolfgirl8 | @Willowfern ]

Burningspark sat near the cliffs. He wasn't stupid enough to do the training by the edge, but maybe it wouldn't have been a bad idea. Test their skills and reflexes but... if one of the apprentices got hurt or died, Burningspark would again be taking the blame for their incompetence, and that's what got him here in the first place. He wasn't ready to die for being stupid or having stupid apprentices. "Alrighty then, I believe we're all here." His voice dripped with disappointment, not at them for being timely, but simply at them for being there. He didn't like social interaction, much less with a bunch of bouncy ignorant furballs. However, keeping his conversation with Doetuft in mind, he sighed and managed to not look too grumpy. "What do you all know?" The dark russet tom asked, his gold eyes cutting to each apprentice. "And Fadedpaw, I know you don't know anything yet. We haven't gotten there in your training, but this can count as your first sparring training." He turned to his apprentice with a disinterested flick of his burnt ear before turning to the other two.

[ Posting order Me -> Creeped Out -> Willowfern -> Wolfgirl8. That's just to keep this organized and to keep from spamming someone with mentions ]

JusticeRabbit November 17th, 2020 08:59 AM

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Fadedpaw looked at the other two then back at Burningspark as she heard her name being called. "Yes, Burningspark." She mewed half angry because.
@Pluto
@Willowfern
@WolfGIRL

Willowfern November 17th, 2020 05:48 PM

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[ @Creeped Out | @Wolfgirl8 | @Pluto ]
“Not much,” Pumpkinpaw meowed, “Only a few odd moves I’ve made up.”

vellichor November 19th, 2020 09:18 PM

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// @Arie — i apologize in advance if it’s short ):
Buzzardpaw
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The tabby cat grabbed at... nothing. He was left empty pawed, and could only watch as her paw swung towards him. Her words echoed in his ears. Faster. He only barely managed to duck, as her paw disturbed the fur atop his head. Nope... nope. Nevermind. It had caught on his side, sending him into the soil and sand. Blegh. He desperately spat out grit and dirt, Leaping to his paws. With a desperate cry, he dove forward, trying to catch his mentor by surprise. He hoped he’d gotten up fast enough and maybe even startled her with his cry. Or, just got lucky. Either way, he wanted to knock her aside. Get the upper paw. Or something.

Wolfgirl8 November 20th, 2020 12:09 PM

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My mentor took me battle training once and I practiced as a kit so I know some things,”Marigoldpaw mewed eager to start training. Oh man this is going to be fun! I can’t wait to reck someone!
( @Pluto @Willowfern @Creeped Out So sorry fir the late response this go buried in my mentions! )

Pluto November 20th, 2020 01:34 PM

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[ @Creeped Out @Willowfern @Wolfgirl8 - its alright haha ]

Burningspark gave all three of them disapproving glares. He didn't like the anger radiating off of Fadedpaw but he was more annoyed neither of the other two apprentices had much more experience. Letting out an exasperated sigh, he rumbled, "So basically you all don't know much." He flicked his tail and looked them over before started "Alright then, our first move will be with claws sheathed. It will be a leap and hold kind of move. One of you will spring onto my back and bat at me with your paws - make sure your claws are sheathed or I will send all three of you to the medicine den - while the other two should try and attack me from bot sides." He explained.

[ Ah screw the posting order pffff - post when you want haha ]

Rani November 20th, 2020 01:43 PM

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Originally Posted by gs29513 (Post 844454)
(It's awesome! I didn't know Rani meant queen, but I adore pinnipeds too! So good at swimming!)
Listening to Adderfang's explanation of how he should push up and roll his shoulders, and about how thrashing didn't really work, Shrewpaw wiggled his shoulders experimentally. There might be one obvious flaw with this plan, when the cat pinning you was about twice as heavy as you were, but he might as well give it a shot. Maybe he'd get really lucky and only get sat on by a tiny apprentice? Bending his front legs under is chest, he pushed up in what he thought was a fairly sudden motion, except Adderfang weighted A LOT. Turning his really fast push up into more of shakey, staggery stretch. Oops. He'd have to work on getting stronger if he was actually going to pull this one off quickly. Still, he was now almost halfway up, so he tried to roll his shoulders, thinking wave. HE WAS A WAVE! HE WAS A WAVE! And repeating that to himself over and over did help, his motion becoming a bit more fluid, although he was fairly certain Adderfang was still up there, judging by how much his legs were shaking, holding up the weight. So, not wanting to have to flop back down and try again, the small apprentice dropped his left shoulder, hoping she would just.....skid off. Although that might not work. He wasn't sure what he was supposed to do when his opponent weighed about a ton, but he was giving it a shot. @Rani

Adderfang grunted as she increasingly struggled to keep her grip on the apprentice in the face of the rolling movements, though she still didn’t let go. Shrewpaw would have to work for it but as he suddenly dropped his shoulder with how unstable she already was Adderfangs paws just skidded of the younger toms back and he was freed from her grasp. “Good job that kind of unpredictability is good in fights, it’ll be a boon in the future. I guess thats the second pin escape down, if that doesn’t work in battle you can ram the back of your head into them too the shock of the impact can sometimes buy you some wiggle room or space. Do you want to practice either of those pins and escapes again of do you want to move on to special moves or a spar straight away?” The warrior asked stepping back to give the apprentice some space.

Rani November 20th, 2020 01:45 PM

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Lash out, lash out, lash out, he was going for the roll! If Shrikepaw hadn’t had this exact move used on him before last time he tried to cling during battle he would’ve been squashed and even as is he barley managed to push off of the warrior and clumsily twist mid air to land upright to get away. Still he did yanking his tail away so it didn’t end up caught and now caught flat footed was forced to retreat. Dashing to a short distance away Shrikepaw took the moment to catch his breath again, winded at the close call, he hadn’t wanted to bolt the tom was trying to heed the advice and stay close but his minimal stamina was starting to be his downfall and the space was necessary.

This was the flaw with relying on speed and agility in a fight against a stronger foe, you tired rapidly and if you couldn’t defeat them quickly (not like he was gonna win this spar but he was trying) you were just making their win harder. Add to the fact that the endurance of an apprentice was nothing compared to a full blown warrior want a good thing. If Shrikepaw could bait his mentor into being the one to move around a lot maybe he could even the playing field…. Well he was a risk taker.
“I hardly feel stuck but then again if I wasn’t fast enough I would be. Is your weight the reason Im the one making all the big moves? I wouldn’t have pegged you as that kind of cat but I also wouldn’t have pegged you as a coward. If you want to pin me you need to actually catch me first you know.” Come on you striped menace come and attack. The monochrome tom couldn’t do anything but wait and brace to see if his ploy worked.
@Pepperkins

Wolfgirl8 November 20th, 2020 02:02 PM

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Marigoldpaw let out a soft irritated growl. She was hoping she could use her favorite moves: head butting and or ramming into a cat. Maybe even using that dirt move where she kicked it into her enemies eyes and temporarily blinded them. Instead she had to do what Sir.I’m disappointed and grumpy said. Blah. Blah. Blah. With a silent huff she spared a glance at Pumpkinpaw and Fadedpaw trying to convey that she would do the leap and hold and they should close in from the side. She waited for an answer. If they didn’t answer soon she’d just do it. Marigoldpaw wasn’t the perfect team player.
( @Pluto @Willowfern @Creeped Out Yessss! Freedom! :) )

gs29513 November 20th, 2020 02:03 PM

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Getting to his feet and quickly shaking out his fur, quite pleased that he had actually managed to get rid of Adderfang, Shrewpaw put that "unpredictability is good" comment in his brain for further use. The smashing the head into someone thing sounded effective, if a bit damaging to his cranium. But he supposed if a cat was shredding you from the top down, a bruised head was NOT what you were most worried about. You were most worried about your back being literally taken into several pieces. Nodding quickly, he contemplated the question a minute. It might be good to learn one more move first, just so he could try it out during the spar. After all, she knew a LOT of special moves, so he should maybe at least learn one. His voice fairly neutral, the small tom asked Could I learn a special move or two? That way I can try them out when we're actually fighting, so I get an idea of how to use them in a real battle. Taking a step back, in case Adderfang needed space to demonstrate, he watched her attentively, not wanting to miss anything. After all, this could be the difference between becoming a warrior and......not. And being shamed in front of the whole entire clan, or exiled or something equally awful. @Rani

ghostwriter November 21st, 2020 07:33 AM

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@Tigerspirit2009

Tallfern led her apprentice to the training cliffs, already trying to develop a plan of action, “Alright,” she announced, “Let’s get started. Firstly, we need to address basic combat posture. Always keep your stance wide and your body slightly lowered.” She crouched slightly, widening her stance and dropping her tail, “Give it a try. This will anchor you to the ground and make you much harder to knock over.”

shaae_26 November 21st, 2020 07:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Larkstripe (Post 854154)
@Tigerspirit2009

Tallfern led her apprentice to the training cliffs, already trying to develop a plan of action, “Alright,” she announced, “Let’s get started. Firstly, we need to address basic combat posture. Always keep your stance wide and your body slightly lowered.” She crouched slightly, widening her stance and dropping her tail, “Give it a try. This will anchor you to the ground and make you much harder to knock over.”

Frogpaw copied ehr, but he was bouncing around a bit and his tail was high in the air, flicking back and forth.

Rani November 22nd, 2020 02:36 AM

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Giving a nod Adderfang took a quick moment to think up a few moves that may be good before she began.

"The first move is a blinding one, it can be either used to cover your moves or directly disable your foe." The warrior demonstrated quickly scooping up a pawful of dirt and tossing it forward into the air in front of her. Demonstrating the blinding move first to not completely obscure the air too fast she showed the move several times to properly show the movements. A tight paw in a quick grab and shove/toss forward releasing just at the end. This method keeps the dirt tight, fast, and compact great for shooting straight into the eyes of a foe. She even showed how this move would usually be followed up by an immediate forward charge to unleash a full frontal attack.
The second type of dirt toss was slower, a long open pawed scoop going into a wide arch, paw open and loose the whole time. This movement created a large cloud that worked to help obscure the movements of the cat inside, something Adderfang demonstrated by sneaking close to Shrewpaw and emerging suddenly.

"Now this move one works best if you're bigger than your foe but if you can grab a paw start moving. If you're dragging them around fast they cannot get up and retaliate leaving you free to strike on occasion or let clanmates thrash them while they're down, or simply drag them over rocks that generally hurts. If you're too small though you can just grab any limb and yank hard, which usually hurts, sometimes breaks a bone, and always throws one off balance especially if they're mid movement"

"This last move is both a pin move and a leap one. It will get you on top of a foe while pushing them to the ground and choking them. Approach fast and wrap your paws around their neck or shoulder like an embrace, then using your momentum jump and hang on them like a tree branch, curving your back paws up and around to land on their back. Use your tail to help flip yourself while you do so, if you've ever climbed a tree it's the same movement to climbing a branch from below, hang and flip up around. You should end up on top, paws around their neck and them pulled to the ground, from there you can pin or simply hit them easier while theyre down."
It was near impossible to demonstrate this one solo but the large warrior feared she'd break Shrewpaws spine if she tried it on him so after demonstrating the movement as best she could she decided to let him try on her in a bit and correct him from there if he needed it.

"Try them Ill correct any errors I see." She instructed stepping back to watch.
@gs29513

gs29513 November 22nd, 2020 06:22 AM

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Her demeanor still a bit ruffled, disconcerted from the meeting, Doeflame led Foxpaw to the training cliffs, scrambling up them quickly, having done so before. From the top, she made sure her apprentice made it up safely before moving to the center of the area, tail lashing a bit in annoyance at how many cats there were here already. Still, the more who knew how good Foxpaw was the better she supposed, Dawnstar had publicly said she expected great things of her. Her voice level, she mewed Alright, just.....attack me. We'll see where you are, and move from there. This would show Doeflame her style and current skills, so they could build off of them. @Foxsnarl (So sorry this took so long :heartbounce: )

Snow Fox November 23rd, 2020 08:38 AM

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Foxpaw followed her mentor up a cliff. Really? A cliff? Forget this, she'd rather swim. The apprentice kept her mouth shut though, still shocked about the meeting. Foxpaw stood there as Doeflame spoke. "Ok." She responded. Foxpaw slunk forward waiting for a opening. Her eyes scanned the terrain and Doeflame both. @gs29513

JusticeRabbit November 23rd, 2020 11:25 AM

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Originally Posted by Pluto (Post 853768)
[ @Creeped Out @Willowfern @Wolfgirl8 - its alright haha ]

Burningspark gave all three of them disapproving glares. He didn't like the anger radiating off of Fadedpaw but he was more annoyed neither of the other two apprentices had much more experience. Letting out an exasperated sigh, he rumbled, "So basically you all don't know much." He flicked his tail and looked them over before started "Alright then, our first move will be with claws sheathed. It will be a leap and hold kind of move. One of you will spring onto my back and bat at me with your paws - make sure your claws are sheathed or I will send all three of you to the medicine den - while the other two should try and attack me from bot sides." He explained.

[ Ah screw the posting order pffff - post when you want haha ]

Fadedpaw aimed to jump on his back and dug her sheathed paws into his fur

gs29513 November 23rd, 2020 05:15 PM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
Her apprentice was studying her, the terrain, figuring out a strategy. Sensible, but boring for the one being scoped out, so Doeflame decided to get the fight going, claws unsheathed. She didn't like to do it, but Foxpaw had done it with Dawnstar, so she wouldn't get hurt to badly. At least, she didn't think so. With a hiss, the large warrior leapt forward, hoping to just bowl into her apprentice and use her size to pin her or at least put her on the back paw. Then she could see what the new clanmate was made of. @Foxsnarl

gs29513 November 24th, 2020 11:40 AM

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Shrewpaw understood the idea behind, why anyone would do, the sand spray. If your opponent couldn't see you, they couldn't hit you, and the sand spray did that by obscuring their view, and maybe scratching up their eyes. He practiced it a bit behind him, his small paws flinging up a gritty cloud behind his back. As he watched Adderfang flipped the sand at him, he snapped his eyes close not wanting to incur damage. After all, HE couldn't hit people if he couldn't see either. His eyes were still closed when Adderfang sprayed sand at him, so he kept them closed till it had pattered to the ground, then spinning in confusion as Adderfang wasn't where he had last seen her. Letting out a small eep as she touched his hind leg, whirling around to swing a fluffy paw at the warrior, more of a "I found you, you're not super sneaky" than in anger.

The next move was much more violent, much less useful for the small apprentice, but he supposed it could definitely do injury if you yanked hard enough. Not that he was likely to try that, since he would likely end up getting dragged about by a cat on three legs, which would be fairly humiliating, and also painful for his mouth. Unless he could find a really itsy bitsy cat to try it on. Like Shrikepaw! LIGHTBULB! He was DEFINITELY going to try that out on his little......friend? enemy? sibling of friend? He wasn't sure at this point, but his thoughts were interrupted by the complicated explanation of the next move.

The grabbing the neck bit and shoving them into the ground made a lot of sense, although you could probably kill a cat if you weren't careful. Although that might be the goal he supposed, seeing as they might end up in a actual life-or-death fight with a Windclan cat at some point. Or a Riverclan or Thunderclan cat for that matter he supposed, as he watched Adderfang attempt to show him how to do what he was going to call "the flippy thing". When instructed to try it he rushed forward, basically trying to give Adderfang's neck a hug before pushing off with his hind legs, trying hard to rotate his body around to land on her neatly, and almost certainly failing, before he began to enter the backside of the arc, falling down towards the warrior's back. @Rani (Sorry for the late reply)

Rani November 25th, 2020 08:09 PM

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Adderfang didn't react to the batting beyond an amused huff, it was an understandable reaction and cute in the 'I'm still young' way. Though maybe that was just Adderfang.
She held still as Shrewpaw approached and leapt, it was safer for the apprentice to experiment from a nonstruggling opponent than risk injury for the tom and the warrior by giving him a realistic view of how the move would go in a real battle. Forced flat from the weight and momentum of the apprentice the warriors ears flicked a couple times as she took in a few flaws in his technique. Still the point to this move was that even against bigger and stronger foes it was hard to remain standing against the impact of another cat on your back no matter if you didnt do it perfectly. The trouble was pulling it off against a fighting foe, something Shrewpaw would soon find out.
"Thats very good Shrewpaw, please get off my spine, well done! Some minor things, try to swing your back legs harder to land with more force and duck a little more to the side with your grab and jump to avoid potential retaliatory biting. Other then that you just need to do it faster and not panic when your foe is resisting. Now try it again and don't worry if you find it more difficult."

This time when Shrewpaw charged her Adderfang would try and snap at him and jump and thrash when he latched on, of course she wasn't actually going to land a blow on him and would be going easy on the young tom but he would defiantly find it harder this time.

@gs29513

gs29513 November 25th, 2020 09:52 PM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
Pleased that he had at least managed to squish the decidedly unresisting warrior, it would be a bit of a problem if he hadn't been able to after all, Shrewpaw slithered off, turning to face Adderfang in time for her feedback which was good he supposed. At least he managed to get on her, that was the most basic bit of it down anyway. After all, if he couldn't do that he was pretty well in trouble in terms of future attempts. He needed to use more force, and he hoped that he would be able to generate it by pushing off harder and using his body more, although doing it faster and not panicking at the same time would be rough. It didn't freak him out, fighting, it was more of a "I hope I do this right" thing.
Thoughts banished now though, he sped forward, momentarily alarmed to see Adderfang snapping at him but putting it out of his head, reaching his front legs for her neck and pushing off, swinging his hind legs and tail a bit wildly but forcefully, and then plummeting down with a bit more force, at least he thought so, towards the warrior, hoping he wasn't going to just slide off her side. THAT would be embarrassing. @Rani

Arie November 25th, 2020 11:27 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by elysian (Post 853275)
// @Arie — i apologize in advance if it’s short ):
Buzzardpaw
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The tabby cat grabbed at... nothing. He was left empty pawed, and could only watch as her paw swung towards him. Her words echoed in his ears. Faster. He only barely managed to duck, as her paw disturbed the fur atop his head. Nope... nope. Nevermind. It had caught on his side, sending him into the soil and sand. Blegh. He desperately spat out grit and dirt, Leaping to his paws. With a desperate cry, he dove forward, trying to catch his mentor by surprise. He hoped he’d gotten up fast enough and maybe even startled her with his cry. Or, just got lucky. Either way, he wanted to knock her aside. Get the upper paw. Or something.

[Only 6 days late not bad pfpf]

Good. He was getting better, and that was Doetuft liked to... not see but well experience. As he came at her again, she moved out of the way but her tail was not as reactive as her body it seemed and he somehow managed to grab it, and she was stunted from her sidewards movement that was going to lead into another counter attack by the simple fact that he had her tail. Flickering her ears in annoyance she let out a whine, but it was ridiculous cause he'd done a good job, she just wasn't the biggest fan of being caught where she knew she'd been able to do better.

"You're improving... Buzzardpaw... you're doing... really good." But she would like to have her tail back. Would really really like to have her tail back and she pulled, attempting to get it out once again. "Screeching is... only good if you... don't have the surprise... other than that... it'll reveal your position and... where you're coming from. If there is... already sound of fighting... it is also... useful. But... you're getting better... and I'm proud... of you."

vellichor November 26th, 2020 10:10 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Arie (Post 858131)


[Only 6 days late not bad pfpf]

Good. He was getting better, and that was Doetuft liked to... not see but well experience. As he came at her again, she moved out of the way but her tail was not as reactive as her body it seemed and he somehow managed to grab it, and she was stunted from her sidewards movement that was going to lead into another counter attack by the simple fact that he had her tail. Flickering her ears in annoyance she let out a whine, but it was ridiculous cause he'd done a good job, she just wasn't the biggest fan of being caught where she knew she'd been able to do better.

"You're improving... Buzzardpaw... you're doing... really good." But she would like to have her tail back. Would really really like to have her tail back and she pulled, attempting to get it out once again. "Screeching is... only good if you... don't have the surprise... other than that... it'll reveal your position and... where you're coming from. If there is... already sound of fighting... it is also... useful. But... you're getting better... and I'm proud... of you."

Buzzardpaw
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The tabby had managed to grab onto something! He held on tight, refusing to let go even as she tried. Well, probably tried. Maybe that was just the way her tail was. He didn’t know. Anyway, yes! His mentor let out a weird noise. Uh... okay. He let go of the tail, assuming it was over. Yeah. She had yanked it away from him anyway. He... he wasn’t sure how to respond to that. All he had done was grab her tail, was that really improving? One quick glance at the sky later, he spoke up. "Am I? I... I dunno. I shouldn’t have screeched, I... you..."

"You are?"

Lonely November 27th, 2020 06:24 AM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by gs29513 (Post 858576)
This kit definitely had an attitude problem, and Shrewpaw really wanted to snap at the little thing now, but that wouldn't really accomplish much, probably just get him a couple whacks from the kid. Which wouldn't hurt dreadfully, but would still be annoying. And then the kid asked him to take him out of camp? He wasn't stupid, he couldn't even go out by himself, let alone with a kit! He didn't want to get shredded, murdered, exiled or ANYTHING at this point, he couldn't go asking for trouble! His mew firm, almost brittle, Shrewpaw responded with a clipped No. I am not taking you out of camp. I fancy keeping my fur a bit too much thanks. before fixing his gaze on the kit to see if he had any more questions. @SaltyTeardrops
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Nodding rather stiffly as his request for battle training was granted, Shrewpaw remained near Yellowsnarl and the other apprentices slowly trickling over, his tail twitching in anticipation. He wondered if it would be sparring, special moves, maybe some situations they had to react to? He really wasn't sure, but he didn't think anything could really be a waste of time if it involved fighting, since that was the most important skill now for him, at least until he had passed his assessment and become a warrior. Then he might have to tune up his hunting a bit. @Russetstorm

@Tigerspirit2009
Yellowsnarl led the apprentices to the training cliffs, and sat down waiting for them there. "so, I want Shrewpaw to attack Frogpaw right now, so I can get an idea of your skill level, then Frogpaw attack Shrewpaw. You can't strike with your claws but you can glint them for scare." Said Yellowsnarl with a smirk.

shaae_26 November 27th, 2020 06:58 AM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Russetstorm (Post 858703)

@Tigerspirit2009
Yellowsnarl led the apprentices to the training cliffs, and sat down waiting for them there. "so, I want Shrewpaw to attack Frogpaw right now, so I can get an idea of your skill level, then Frogpaw attack Shrewpaw. You can't strike with your claws but you can glint them for scare." Said Yellowsnarl with a smirk.

Frogpaw braced himself for an attack, but knew no matter what he did, he'd get hit. He hadn't had any battle training!

gs29513 November 27th, 2020 01:34 PM

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@Russetstorm @Tigerspirit2009
It seemed as though they were getting right into it, and as much as he admired and wanted to live up to Yellowsnarl's assumption that they would be able to handle themselves in a fight, Shrewpaw greatly doubted that Frogpaw would be able to. It wasn't as though he could really throw the larger apprentice around, so as he was instructed to go first he moved to slip under the taller belly, and if he made it through the legs raking his soft, sheathed paws through the belly fur of his "opponent". Claws wouldn't be necessary to get the point across. If he made it under anyway that was.

shaae_26 November 27th, 2020 02:27 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by gs29513 (Post 858874)
@Russetstorm @Tigerspirit2009
It seemed as though they were getting right into it, and as much as he admired and wanted to live up to Yellowsnarl's assumption that they would be able to handle themselves in a fight, Shrewpaw greatly doubted that Frogpaw would be able to. It wasn't as though he could really throw the larger apprentice around, so as he was instructed to go first he moved to slip under the taller belly, and if he made it through the legs raking his soft, sheathed paws through the belly fur of his "opponent". Claws wouldn't be necessary to get the point across. If he made it under anyway that was.

(Frogpaw's tiny, lol.)
Frogpaw saw Shrewpaw thinking, and got nervous. The ADHD apprentice was scared, he had no idea what to do. Then his worst nightmare came true. His legs twitched and he began to walk around, thoguh his brain was screaming at him to stop. It took everything he ahd to jsut stay still, let alone croucha dn fight. He magaged an akward psoe, hoping Shrewpaw would just get on with it.

Lonely November 27th, 2020 07:12 PM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by gs29513 (Post 858874)
@Russetstorm @Tigerspirit2009
It seemed as though they were getting right into it, and as much as he admired and wanted to live up to Yellowsnarl's assumption that they would be able to handle themselves in a fight, Shrewpaw greatly doubted that Frogpaw would be able to. It wasn't as though he could really throw the larger apprentice around, so as he was instructed to go first he moved to slip under the taller belly, and if he made it through the legs raking his soft, sheathed paws through the belly fur of his "opponent". Claws wouldn't be necessary to get the point across. If he made it under anyway that was.

@Tigerspirit2009
"Shrewpaw, attack!" Called Yellowsnarl


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