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Radetzky June 5th, 2023 02:29 PM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by ~LeafRabbit~ (Post 1428541)
Eggpaw trotted joyfully behind Spiderheart to the training cliffs. If was a nice morning, good for training. "Yeah, some hunting, bit of battle," he confirmed, then waited expectantly. What would they be doing today?

Spiderheart

"Great, I'm thinking we'll practice some hunting techniques for today's training session. Just let me know if this is something you've already been taught, but I think that even if you have, it's good to get a refresher especially since you've gone some time without training" The molly stated. She took a few steps away from Eggpaw, making sure she had space to demonstrate the different techniques she wanted to show him.

"We'll start with the hunter crouch, a very crucial part when it comes to stalking your prey" Spiderheart informed her apprentice, though she assumed he had already been taught that. The warrior quickly dropped into a crouching position, making sure her apprentice could see how she had her paws and tail positioned. "So what you want to focus on is keeping all four of your paws steadily underneath you. Crouch down until your belly is barely touching the ground, but not too close or you'll make sound and scare the prey away. Lastly, keep your tail low to the ground, preferably in level with your belly" The black molly made sure to explain in detail as she demonstrated the move. Once she had showed off the crouching position, she started quietly but swiftly creep forwards in a small circle around Eggpaw. "When moving forward while crouching it's important you know where to put your paws. One wrong step, and your prey is gone. Keep your paws off any dry leaves or twigs that may cause crunching sounds as you walk" She explained as she finished the circle around him, rising up from the crouching position and sitting up, wrapping her tail around her paws. "Now, how about you give it a try?" She meowed with an encouraging smile.

MockingRabbit June 12th, 2023 06:48 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by Radetzky (Post 1429231)
Spiderheart

"Great, I'm thinking we'll practice some hunting techniques for today's training session. Just let me know if this is something you've already been taught, but I think that even if you have, it's good to get a refresher especially since you've gone some time without training" The molly stated. She took a few steps away from Eggpaw, making sure she had space to demonstrate the different techniques she wanted to show him.

"We'll start with the hunter crouch, a very crucial part when it comes to stalking your prey" Spiderheart informed her apprentice, though she assumed he had already been taught that. The warrior quickly dropped into a crouching position, making sure her apprentice could see how she had her paws and tail positioned. "So what you want to focus on is keeping all four of your paws steadily underneath you. Crouch down until your belly is barely touching the ground, but not too close or you'll make sound and scare the prey away. Lastly, keep your tail low to the ground, preferably in level with your belly" The black molly made sure to explain in detail as she demonstrated the move. Once she had showed off the crouching position, she started quietly but swiftly creep forwards in a small circle around Eggpaw. "When moving forward while crouching it's important you know where to put your paws. One wrong step, and your prey is gone. Keep your paws off any dry leaves or twigs that may cause crunching sounds as you walk" She explained as she finished the circle around him, rising up from the crouching position and sitting up, wrapping her tail around her paws. "Now, how about you give it a try?" She meowed with an encouraging smile.

//Ah, I forgot about this:0
Spiderheart was right. He did already know most of this, but she was also right that is was good to go over some stuff. He listened carefully in case there was some new information there, then mimicked her stance. Belly-fur almost toughing the ground, he hung his tail to be level with it. He tensed his legs, gently feeling the ground with each paw before setting it down. Eggpaw started padding around his mentor like she had be to him, keeping his right side to her. "This good?" He asked, then tried pouncing. He landed well, in almost the spot he had aimed for.

Radetzky June 12th, 2023 10:03 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by ~LeafRabbit~ (Post 1432422)
//Ah, I forgot about this:0
Spiderheart was right. He did already know most of this, but she was also right that is was good to go over some stuff. He listened carefully in case there was some new information there, then mimicked her stance. Belly-fur almost toughing the ground, he hung his tail to be level with it. He tensed his legs, gently feeling the ground with each paw before setting it down. Eggpaw started padding around his mentor like she had be to him, keeping his right side to her. "This good?" He asked, then tried pouncing. He landed well, in almost the spot he had aimed for.

Spiderheart

The black molly watched her apprentice as he performed a hunter's crouch. Impressed by how quickly he seemed to catch on, she gave him an approving smile. Perhaps it was because he already knew most of this from before, but she was still proud of him. "That's really good! And a nice pounce too" Spiderheart purred. Eggpaw certainly didn't seem to have any trouble with stalking so the she-cat decided to move on to the next part of the training session. She wanted to give him the opportunity to actually try to hunt something.

When sniffing the air, Spiderheart picked up the scent of frog, vole, and some other small animals. Perfect, it probably wouldn't be too hard for the apprentice to sniff out some prey. "Eggpaw, since you've got the stalking down, I want to let you try and catch something. Let's start off easy - can you smell anything? And if so, are you able to make out where it is?" She asked him, trying to keep her voice down as to not scare away any potential prey.

MockingRabbit June 13th, 2023 09:30 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by Radetzky (Post 1432486)
Spiderheart

The black molly watched her apprentice as he performed a hunter's crouch. Impressed by how quickly he seemed to catch on, she gave him an approving smile. Perhaps it was because he already knew most of this from before, but she was still proud of him. "That's really good! And a nice pounce too" Spiderheart purred. Eggpaw certainly didn't seem to have any trouble with stalking so the she-cat decided to move on to the next part of the training session. She wanted to give him the opportunity to actually try to hunt something.

When sniffing the air, Spiderheart picked up the scent of frog, vole, and some other small animals. Perfect, it probably wouldn't be too hard for the apprentice to sniff out some prey. "Eggpaw, since you've got the stalking down, I want to let you try and catch something. Let's start off easy - can you smell anything? And if so, are you able to make out where it is?" She asked him, trying to keep her voice down as to not scare away any potential prey.

That sounded easy. Eggpaw raised his nose and took in a good whiff. "Yeah, there is a good amount here," he kept his voice low, like Spiderhert was doing. "There is something that smells like a toad, I think." But he didn't want to catch that, he wanted a challenge! "And a mouse, I believe, though it smells different when it is alive." There was no air current, but Eggpaw guessed that it was somewhere around his left side. He crouched down again and started toward it. One step, then another. Through a bush, careful not to crackle the dead leaves. He noticed that he had ended up a little to the right of where he had planned. Alter his course, listen, move, pounce. He missed it, landing slightly too far to the right. The mouse scurried and he scrambled, but in the end, its grey body was in his jaws. He carried it back to the clearing triumphantly. "How'd I do?"

Radetzky June 13th, 2023 10:23 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by ~LeafRabbit~ (Post 1432966)
That sounded easy. Eggpaw raised his nose and took in a good whiff. "Yeah, there is a good amount here," he kept his voice low, like Spiderhert was doing. "There is something that smells like a toad, I think." But he didn't want to catch that, he wanted a challenge! "And a mouse, I believe, though it smells different when it is alive." There was no air current, but Eggpaw guessed that it was somewhere around his left side. He crouched down again and started toward it. One step, then another. Through a bush, careful not to crackle the dead leaves. He noticed that he had ended up a little to the right of where he had planned. Alter his course, listen, move, pounce. He missed it, landing slightly too far to the right. The mouse scurried and he scrambled, but in the end, its grey body was in his jaws. He carried it back to the clearing triumphantly. "How'd I do?"

Spiderheart

Hazel eyes followed Eggpaw as he sniffed out the mouse and began stalking it. Spiderheart watched from a distance, careful as to not scare away his prey, but close enough to keep an eye on him. He had gotten the stalking down quite well, and the molly was pleased to see how he carefully placed his paws down and avoided any crunchy leaves. Even when he got slightly off track, he soon noticed it and altered his course. Good. She followed him with her gaze as he pounced and ran after the little mouse, and gave him a pleased smile when he came back with the body dingling from his jaws. "Good job!!" She purred, blinking happily to Eggpaw. "We can work some more on that pouncing technique - it's quite difficult to get it right. Other than that you did great, I like that you ran after the mouse instead of giving up when you missed that first pounce. As a warrior, and especially as one of ShadowClan, you should never give up. If you do, you might miss out on opportunities like that" Spiderheart praised him, and gestured to the mouse he had caught.

"I think we should try to work a bit more on that pounce, I think that's the only thing you lack as of right now" She said, looking around. The black she-cat sniffed the air once more. There were still some prey hanging around here. At first, she wanted to just take a rock, place it somewhere and make him practice pouncing on that, but she had a feeling that'd be too easy. Instead, they might aswell get some actual hunting down while training. Eggpaw had already caught a mouse after all, so if he failed to catch something else it wouldn't be a big deal. "Okay, I want you to sniff out something else. This time, I want you to focus on your pounce. Take your time with it - the best time to pounce is when your prey is turned away from you and busy doing something else" Spiderheart informed her apprentice, then sat down and gave him a quick nod to let him know that he could begin.

MockingRabbit June 16th, 2023 05:53 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by Radetzky (Post 1432988)
Spiderheart

Hazel eyes followed Eggpaw as he sniffed out the mouse and began stalking it. Spiderheart watched from a distance, careful as to not scare away his prey, but close enough to keep an eye on him. He had gotten the stalking down quite well, and the molly was pleased to see how he carefully placed his paws down and avoided any crunchy leaves. Even when he got slightly off track, he soon noticed it and altered his course. Good. She followed him with her gaze as he pounced and ran after the little mouse, and gave him a pleased smile when he came back with the body dingling from his jaws. "Good job!!" She purred, blinking happily to Eggpaw. "We can work some more on that pouncing technique - it's quite difficult to get it right. Other than that you did great, I like that you ran after the mouse instead of giving up when you missed that first pounce. As a warrior, and especially as one of ShadowClan, you should never give up. If you do, you might miss out on opportunities like that" Spiderheart praised him, and gestured to the mouse he had caught.

"I think we should try to work a bit more on that pounce, I think that's the only thing you lack as of right now" She said, looking around. The black she-cat sniffed the air once more. There were still some prey hanging around here. At first, she wanted to just take a rock, place it somewhere and make him practice pouncing on that, but she had a feeling that'd be too easy. Instead, they might aswell get some actual hunting down while training. Eggpaw had already caught a mouse after all, so if he failed to catch something else it wouldn't be a big deal. "Okay, I want you to sniff out something else. This time, I want you to focus on your pounce. Take your time with it - the best time to pounce is when your prey is turned away from you and busy doing something else" Spiderheart informed her apprentice, then sat down and gave him a quick nod to let him know that he could begin.

Eggpaw grinned, pleased with the praise, nodded along when she talked about his pounce. And again. The pale tom sniffed there air, and decided to go for the toad this time, for an easy catch because he was just practicing his pounce. He dropped down into the hunter crouch and started moving. He again noticed that he was heading in slightly the wrong direction, and had to alter his course. He readied himself, focusing on the frog, how far he needed to jump, then pounced. The amphibian gave a startled croak, jumped away from him. Eggpaw spared half a heartbeat wondering how in the blazed he had missed, he had been so sure he had it, but ended up to it's right, then flung out a paw to snag it's webbed foot, yanked it closer, snapped its spine. He padded back to Spiderheart, feeling a bit flustered.

Radetzky June 17th, 2023 06:56 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by ~LeafRabbit~ (Post 1434011)
Eggpaw grinned, pleased with the praise, nodded along when she talked about his pounce. And again. The pale tom sniffed there air, and decided to go for the toad this time, for an easy catch because he was just practicing his pounce. He dropped down into the hunter crouch and started moving. He again noticed that he was heading in slightly the wrong direction, and had to alter his course. He readied himself, focusing on the frog, how far he needed to jump, then pounced. The amphibian gave a startled croak, jumped away from him. Eggpaw spared half a heartbeat wondering how in the blazed he had missed, he had been so sure he had it, but ended up to it's right, then flung out a paw to snag it's webbed foot, yanked it closer, snapped its spine. He padded back to Spiderheart, feeling a bit flustered.

Spiderheart

Hm, he missed the pounce again? Well, it was nothing too bad she supposed. Even she had a hard time perfecting that when she was younger. What concerned her was that she always seemed to end up to the right of where he was aiming. As Eggpaw padded back to her with a flustered look on his face, Spiderheart was quick to give him a reassuring smile. "It's okay, you caught the frog at least" She meowed, at the end of the day he had caught 2 pieces of prey already and no one could complain about that. "I've noticed you seem to always end up a bit too far to the right of where you're aiming. Balancing is very important, both in battle and hunting. Don't put too much weight on one side, if you feel yourself drifting the wrong way, try shifting some weight over to the opposite side" The black molly adviced her apprentice. She looked around her, then quickly dug up a pebble from the ground. She gave it a quick push with her fluffy paw and watched it roll a couple tail lengths ahead of her and Eggpaw. Spiderheart backed up a few steps and sat down. "Practice on that pebble over there" She gave a flick with her tail in the direction of the pebble. The molly was sure he'd make an excellent hunter, he was a quick learner and good at making up for his mistakes. She was impressed with how he'd still caught both pieces of prey even though he had missed the first pounce. But she knew he wouldn't always be able to rely on that, he needed to get this down.

MockingRabbit June 19th, 2023 12:50 PM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by Radetzky (Post 1434218)
Spiderheart

Hm, he missed the pounce again? Well, it was nothing too bad she supposed. Even she had a hard time perfecting that when she was younger. What concerned her was that she always seemed to end up to the right of where he was aiming. As Eggpaw padded back to her with a flustered look on his face, Spiderheart was quick to give him a reassuring smile. "It's okay, you caught the frog at least" She meowed, at the end of the day he had caught 2 pieces of prey already and no one could complain about that. "I've noticed you seem to always end up a bit too far to the right of where you're aiming. Balancing is very important, both in battle and hunting. Don't put too much weight on one side, if you feel yourself drifting the wrong way, try shifting some weight over to the opposite side" The black molly adviced her apprentice. She looked around her, then quickly dug up a pebble from the ground. She gave it a quick push with her fluffy paw and watched it roll a couple tail lengths ahead of her and Eggpaw. Spiderheart backed up a few steps and sat down. "Practice on that pebble over there" She gave a flick with her tail in the direction of the pebble. The molly was sure he'd make an excellent hunter, he was a quick learner and good at making up for his mistakes. She was impressed with how he'd still caught both pieces of prey even though he had missed the first pounce. But she knew he wouldn't always be able to rely on that, he needed to get this down.

"I noticed that too," he muttered under his breath, but tried what she said. It felt awkward when he tried shifting his weight, more to the left to counter his rightward drift. Surely this couldn't be right? He pushed away a snicker at his joke, then felt embarrassed that he was resorting to a stone for hunting. He started stalking, immediately it felt wrong. He tried pouncing, but toppled over upon touching the ground. He looked at Spiderheart. "I did what you said, but I don't think it is correct..."

Radetzky June 21st, 2023 01:19 PM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by ~LeafRabbit~ (Post 1434972)
"I noticed that too," he muttered under his breath, but tried what she said. It felt awkward when he tried shifting his weight, more to the left to counter his rightward drift. Surely this couldn't be right? He pushed away a snicker at his joke, then felt embarrassed that he was resorting to a stone for hunting. He started stalking, immediately it felt wrong. He tried pouncing, but toppled over upon touching the ground. He looked at Spiderheart. "I did what you said, but I don't think it is correct..."

Spiderheart

Well, that didn't work. If anything, it had made it worse. She'd have to come up with another idea. She also couldn't help but wonder.. what was going on? Spiderheart couldn't recall ever having trouble like that with pouncing when she was an aprentice. And since well, Eggpaw was her first ever apprentice she didn't have enough experience to figure out what was giving him such a hard time. She padded up to him, carefully trying to dust him off with her tail after he had fallen over. "You're right" She agreed, studying the young tom. Spiderheart tilted her head, "What does it feel like, you know when you end up to the right of where you're aiming? Is it balancing that's a struggle or is it something else?" The molly wanted to help him, but she understood that she needed to first try to understand what made it difficult in order to help.

MockingRabbit June 28th, 2023 05:15 AM

Re: ShadowClan Training Cliffs
 
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Originally Posted by Radetzky (Post 1435553)
Spiderheart

Well, that didn't work. If anything, it had made it worse. She'd have to come up with another idea. She also couldn't help but wonder.. what was going on? Spiderheart couldn't recall ever having trouble like that with pouncing when she was an aprentice. And since well, Eggpaw was her first ever apprentice she didn't have enough experience to figure out what was giving him such a hard time. She padded up to him, carefully trying to dust him off with her tail after he had fallen over. "You're right" She agreed, studying the young tom. Spiderheart tilted her head, "What does it feel like, you know when you end up to the right of where you're aiming? Is it balancing that's a struggle or is it something else?" The molly wanted to help him, but she understood that she needed to first try to understand what made it difficult in order to help.

Eggpaw shrugged. "I try to go straight, but I end up going sideways. I don't know what it is, I feel fine when I am crouching." He frowned, trying to figure it out. "I guess this isn't normal then, is it?" He joked.


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