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dino. April 28th, 2021 07:25 PM

the puppet and his puppeteer
 

Okay folks :eyes: been considering this for some time now and I think it's time to bring this one into action.

Whisperpaw here has seen some pretty heavy trauma starting from a pretty young age (being essentially eaten alive will do that to ya i'd think), so of course I'd jump on the chance to traumatize him more.

Long story short - I want him to have a path of evil/redemption arc. Ideally this would start mid-apprenticeship and stretch into early/mid warriorhood, but before I go into details here's the run-down:
 
Whisperpaw is still incredibly insecure of the scars that cross his body. They're impossible to miss, and 9 times out of 10, they're the first things cats notice about him. He's tired of the looks, the stares, and he wishes there was some way to stop the insecurities that flood his mind.

Then [Puppeteer] comes along one day. They run into each other. [Puppeteer], of course, notices Whisperpaw's scars, but they also notice that he's a Clan cat. [Puppeteer] is someone who is a chaser of power, and they've heard the tales of how the Clans carry themselves. A lightbulb goes off in their head - if eyes are the windows to the soul, then the youth, the insecurity, the malleability shining in Whisperpaw's eyes is the start of [Puppeteer]'s path to power.

Instead of mentioning Whisper's scars, they say hello. A simple greeting to be sure, but Whisperpaw is almost immediately hooked. They talk for a bit, [Puppeteer] warming him up to them, slowly reeling him into their scheme from the very beginning. Whisperpaw leaves feeling validated, appreciated, and of course [Puppeteer] promises that they'll see each other again.

And so of course they do. They meet at the same spot, night after night, doing what Whisper thinks is just... talking. But [Puppeteer] is slowly poisoning his mind - feeding him subtle ideas of betrayal and the notion of strength and power. Eventually, it turns to only being able to trust them and himself. Whisper feels as if something is off, but decides not to question it, because [Puppeteer] is one of the only cats who sees him for more than his scars.

[Puppeteer] begins to train Whisper in the art of manipulation and quiet killing. They tell him that they are the ONLY one he can trust, besides himself. They tell him that his own Clan (none of them, really) doesn't deserve his attention or loyalty. That certain cats Whisper has mentioned are going to turn on him, and that he should take them out himself before they have the chance to kill him.

This is where [Friend] comes in. [Friend] has been attempting to grow closer to Whisper, because they've noticed the change in his demeanor. He ignores their advances and their attempts, but slowly begins to warm up to them, because they too have looked past his scars from the very start. Then they start to inquire about where he's gone off to, and he retracts from them completely. They notice - he's not trying to hide that he's ignoring them, he even snaps at them sometimes in an effort to get them away from him - and they're hurt, but they don't stop trying to fix their relationship with him. Slowly, the strings that [Puppeteer] have wrapped around his paws and throat have begun to loosen their hold and fray and snap, even if he doesn't know it.

Whisper tells [Puppeteer], and of course they're upset by this. He is THEIR key to power, and no one is going to take that away from them. They tell Whisper that the only way to get [Friend] off of their back is to kill them. Whisper is rattled, but with just a few more honey-laced words, [Puppeteer] has him strung up once more, although those strings are thin and fraying.

Whisper asks [Friend] to go on a walk with them one night. They comply, they head off, and he stops them when they're in a good distance away from the camp, deep in the territory. He's trying to hype himself up, repeating what [Puppeteer] has been saying to him over and over again in his head. And then he realizes that he can't do it. He breaks down in front of [Friend], sobbing and spilling his guts and his secrets to them in a panic. They lay next to him, comfort him, tell him it's going to be okay, and then they explain what's been going on with [Puppeteer].

With [Friend]'s help, and with the strings sliced away for good, Whisper confronts [Puppeteer] one last time. He calls them out on the manipulation they've inflicted on him and says he is cutting ties, for good.


OKAY. god damn. here, take a sip of water and a breather before you move on, that was a long one. you good? awesome. onto applying.

i really don't care how you do it! all you need is some character info and to let me know which role you're applying that character for. i think the only limits i have is that Puppeteer needs to be someone not in ShadowClan and Friend needs to be someone IN ShadowClan and around Whisper's age! (which is 8-9 at this point, his site is a little outdated).

yeah that's pretty much it! @ me and i'll let you know if i think they can work or not <3

EDIT: I'm closing applications for Friend for the time being! I've gotten a few interesting characters sent my way and I want to feel those out for the moment - if it turns out that whisper doesn't mesh well with any of them , i'll be opening it back up. please refrain from applying for Friend for now, though!

poppy April 28th, 2021 07:31 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
@Slushie

Maybe Brackenpaw could be the friend?

Jay. April 28th, 2021 07:34 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
I have a ShadowClan apprentice named Frecklepaw, he is pretty nice and and I could see him trying to gane Whisper's trust. He got attacked once so he has a little trauma also.

dino. April 28th, 2021 07:36 PM

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// @-Skyfall-
we could do a brief little 'non-canon' intro roleplay in VA to see if they work out together, if you'd like! it wouldn't take place in the actual roleplay, but it'd help me get a feel for their dynamic.

// @Jayfeather 76
do you have any sort of bio typed out for him that i could take a peek at?

Jay. April 28th, 2021 07:38 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
I am actually starting to make bios for my characters! I'll make one for him in a little bit and I'll link it here for ya!

@Slushie

dino. April 28th, 2021 07:41 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
// @Jayfeather 76

awesome, i'll give it a look once you're done with it!

carmen April 28th, 2021 07:48 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
@Slushie
Depending on what you are looking for, I have a Dark Forest cat and a rogue who might fit as a good puppeteer. My Dark Forest cat seems really seems and as if. she she be in Starclan when she is actually extremely manipulative. In another RP site, she has actually manipulated a medicine cat apprentice into abandoning Starclan. If you want someone alive, I have a rogue named Yew. At the moment, she is not really developed in RolePlaying, but should you like her idea I could turn her evil. It would probably be that she wants a way to destroy or take over the clans.

dino. April 28th, 2021 07:50 PM

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// @Pheasantflight

do you happen to have a bio for Yew that i could take a look at :0

carmen April 28th, 2021 07:58 PM

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@Slushie
Let's see-
Name: Yew
Gender: Female
Personality: Yew is a narcissistic she-cat with slight superiority complex. She thinks that she should rule the forest and anyone who doubts her should be killed. If she sees someone who she thinks could help her achieve one of her goals, she will do almost anything to twist them to her side.
Looks: Black she-cat with pale green eyes
Is this good? I made it up off the top of my head.

dino. April 28th, 2021 08:01 PM

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// @Pheasantflight

i like the superiority complex - think i'll hold off on making a decision for the time being though! ty for applying /w\

carmen April 28th, 2021 08:07 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
@Slushie
Ok! Thanks for considering Yew!

dino. April 28th, 2021 08:12 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Pheasantflight (Post 985359)
@Slushie
Ok! Thanks for considering Yew!

:heartbounce:

ChillCat April 28th, 2021 08:48 PM

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I have Silentpaw as a friend, her bio is in my signature.

She's actually 7.5 moons now. She's got that trauma too, and her quiet and logical personality may mesh well with Whisper. She's not easily manipulated by those she doesn't know. She's the sort of cat who could tell if someone's in an abusive relationship with a snap of the paw, but not when she's in one herself, if you get what I mean. She'd take the info Whisper gives her, and come to an unbiased conclusion. She would then tell Whisper the information, and let him make his own decision, but she will give advice if asked.

Not this: "[Puppeteer] is bad and you should stay away from them."

This: "[Puppeteer] is telling you things about other cats that aren't true. Here's why they aren't true."

I hope you consider Silentpaw! They also have similar names lol @Slushie

Jay. April 28th, 2021 09:28 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
Here

@Slushie

FireyZack April 28th, 2021 09:44 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
@Slushie
I can pitch Sayine

poppy April 29th, 2021 07:35 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
:heartbounce: @Slushie :heartbounce:

Sure! Do you want to start?

starry April 29th, 2021 07:38 AM

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I might have Berrypaw as the friend? Her info is in my signature.

@Slushie

Cobra April 29th, 2021 07:44 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
I have closure! He's a very slick boy, mostly damaged on the inside but on the outside he can appear sane! Very much sane (; His page is a WIP, I can show it once I'm done

dino. April 29th, 2021 10:58 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
// @-Skyfall-
I can get one up in a minute, yep!

// @Jayfeather 76
i really think they'd clash more than work together - whisper would likely argue with him due to his outspokenness and I think that would do more harm than good :0 he could probably be a factor in pushing Whisper toward the puppeteer but I don't think he'd work well as the friend!


// @Stormpoppy
i think the same thing goes for Berry - he'd probably become irritated with her shyness and her stubbornness and would likely end up pushing her away

// @ChillCat
oo okay i see you :eyes: i definitely think they'd work well together and i could see Whisper respecting her and taking her advice when the time comes. we could do a little intro roleplay if you'd like, see how they work out at first?

// @Firey
thanks for sending her my way! I'm waiting on picking the puppeteer but I definitely will be considering her

// @Cobra
already loving him :eyes: especially the name! I'd love to see his page once you're done with it

starry April 29th, 2021 11:01 AM

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Ok! Actually, she is currently getting trained in the DF, which is pulling her shyness away... But her stubbornness stays!
@Slushie

JackHunt_17 April 29th, 2021 11:04 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
Scratch:
Personality:
--Sneaky, evil, sly, convincing.
He has a sweet, yet tart voice, that lures people into his traps, whatever they may be. (I can elaborate more if you wish, @Slushie )

Willie Warf April 29th, 2021 11:04 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
@Slushie

i have my clan hating cat Arrow! Its moonpaws dad! he hates every clan cat and will try to get whisperpaw to kill as many cats in the clan as he can!

~Fierce~ April 29th, 2021 11:08 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
I have the perfect cat for the role of puppeteer. I present to you...Foxear! I know his page has a sort of Windclan vibe but I've given up on him joining Windclan to be honest. He still stays close to places that remind him of moorland but he's been traveling a lot. (Also, Whitepaw from Shadowclan is his sister shhhh) He loves to spend his time just looking for fights and would kill a cat without mercy. He's changed and he's accepted that he'll never be part of the clans so instead he's taken on a hatred of the clans. (I have to update his page he's changed so much just from this post) @Slushie

crumbl April 29th, 2021 05:12 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
@Slushie

I need to keep my boi Quailpaw active but I honestly feel like he would be really good for this plot :eyes: Quailpaw himself is covered in severe physical scars as well, but he's also very quiet and has trouble opening up to people. However, he's attracted to cats who he can relate to- who share his trauma without judging him or intimidating him. Recently Quailpaw mentally gave up battling Dawnstar's tyranny and is having an identity crisis. But this also means he's finally allowing himself to open up to his Clanmates, and Whisper sounds like the kind of guy Quail would be comfortable with making friends with. Quail is quiet, but not shy, and while he has a hard outer shell he can actually be a really good person to talk to and has a wry sense of humor once he opens up to someone. He tends to keep his problems to himself but subconsciously knows that internalizing his stress is unhealthy and deals with it by trying to help other people through their own troubles. His bio is incomplete but I have more about him in my sig if you want to take a look ^^

dino. April 29th, 2021 05:38 PM

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// @Bramblefire01, @~Fierceclaw~, @QueenCocaHead
thank you guys for applying! like i've mentioned, i'm touchy on the puppeteer but i'll definitely be considering your characters. Queen, do you happen to have a bio for Arrow that I could take a look at?

// @Snook
oh man i'm seeing you :eyes: i LOVE this guy right off the bat and i really think they'd get along well. another someone like whisper who's got his own scars and his own fears? yeah, whisper would totally be eating that up and would probably become pretty attached until the whole mid-drama stuff broke out. if you're up for it, i'd love to get a feel for their dynamic through a brief little intro roleplay!

Willie Warf April 29th, 2021 05:41 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Slushie (Post 986308)
// @Bramblefire01, @~Fierceclaw~, @QueenCocaHead
thank you guys for applying! like i've mentioned, i'm touchy on the puppeteer but i'll definitely be considering your characters. Queen, do you happen to have a bio for Arrow that I could take a look at?

// @Snook
oh man i'm seeing you :eyes: i LOVE this guy right off the bat and i really think they'd get along well. another someone like whisper who's got his own scars and his own fears? yeah, whisper would totally be eating that up and would probably become pretty attached until the whole mid-drama stuff broke out. if you're up for it, i'd love to get a feel for their dynamic through a brief little intro roleplay!

I don't...........

dino. April 29th, 2021 05:43 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
// @QueenCocaHead
would you mind typing something up for me, if you feel up to it? could even be a brief description of his personality! just so i can have something to look at when i'm going through characters :0

Jay. April 29th, 2021 05:45 PM

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Alright that's fine! He isn't really the type of guy to try to be mean to cats unless he truly had a reason to be. But yeah I could see that they probably wouldn't get along very well! Maybe we can be in a different plot together soon!

@Slushie

Willie Warf April 29th, 2021 05:52 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Slushie (Post 986311)
// @QueenCocaHead
would you mind typing something up for me, if you feel up to it? could even be a brief description of his personality! just so I can have something to look at when I'm going through characters :0

Arrow is a Smooth talker, accustomed to getting his way and causing chaos. He has a somewhat scarred pelt and a very nice on the outside. On the inside he's and sly and cunning killer, skilled in the art of dragging out deaths and cruel ways. He would definitely love to manipulate Whisper, saying that he used to be a clan cat. He knows enough to seem like one and is very persistent and persuasive.

dino. April 29th, 2021 05:54 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
// @Jayfeather 76
maybe, yeah! if you wanted we could always just have them do some normal interactions every once and a while, whisper needs more of those haha

dino. May 1st, 2021 05:40 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
bump :heartbounce:

crumbl May 1st, 2021 11:13 PM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Slushie (Post 986308)
oh man i'm seeing you :eyes: i LOVE this guy right off the bat and i really think they'd get along well. another someone like whisper who's got his own scars and his own fears? yeah, whisper would totally be eating that up and would probably become pretty attached until the whole mid-drama stuff broke out. if you're up for it, i'd love to get a feel for their dynamic through a brief little intro roleplay!

Sure, I'd love to! Just throw me a mention and I'll pop some Quailpaw your way :p

Fade May 2nd, 2021 11:07 AM

Re: the puppet and his puppeteer
 
Byvdfbgf
Long ass plot XD I can offer Eren,He fits perfectly as the puppeteer

 
Eren is a mentally unstable character, My favorite of mine NFL but here you go. Eren is power and murder hungry.
Eren is currently searching for the windclan that ate his mother (AOT Fans see where im going with this one) but he wants revenages and wants to kill them,he has already burned,and cut
the other killer in the dimlit caverens if you wanna check out how he does stuff.Eren,He's based off the Attack on Titan Eren! He is is training Corps Eren and Levi squad Eren,Hothead and short tempered,murder hungry,Power Hungry. I do hope to one day get a power that allows him to make a copy of himself but be hidden in a different place but thats off topic. He's clever enough to attack Featherfur and insult Twilight with Batglare there. So I'd he's good. Ive been testing my limits with him and he seems to have none. He's kinda respectful though its weird. But that's it
@Slushie :0


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