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Charmer September 26th, 2017 05:09 PM

Finder for Shinefang
 
Hey everyone. As you know, Shinefang is the new medicine cat of Skyclan, and I'm trying to flesh out his background a little bit with some relationships. I'm after:

1. Former apprentices: Apprentice 1, Apprentice 2, Apprentice 3, and Apprentice 4. The only qualification is that they have to be younger than Shinefang. He's 96 moons, so that won't be hard. But in terms of timeline, apprentice one is going to be the apprentice he was training when his mate and kits died, so there will be a clear distinction between his mentoring before and after. Apprentice 4 is going to be the last one he was able to train before age started to make training apprentices too hard on him.

2. Someone to play his dead mate: Slatepelt. As a medicine cat, He'll be having first hand interaction with Starclan, and he has a chip on his shoulder, both for his mate who "left him all alone," and for Starclan, who "took her away." So interaction with her is going to be interesting to say the least.

3. Former Friends: Before the death of his mate, Shinefang was a happy tom who was generally liked, but after the death of his mate, he withdrew and became all business in terms of clan life. Who were these cats he used to enjoy being around?

4. Other. If you have a different role that you think would be interesting, I want to hear about it! These can include, nephews and nieces, mates of dead siblings, former mate's sibling. Whatever you can come up with in those beautiful, creative minds!

Oh, and mention me, pretty please.

Goodness gracious! I didn't expect this many entries! I also didn't expect so many would-be Slatepelt ghosts. Thank you everyone! Guess I'd better slap a cutoff date on this thing. Applications due by 12:01am central time on October 1st.

Also, I'll have to double check to see if this is one my character form, but Slatepelt actually died during her kitting, and so did their three kits. My guy actually has some good reasons to be grouchy.



Form
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Brief physical description:
Brief personality description:
Position you want:
Plot ideas:
Brief summary or relationship then versus now:

Mango September 26th, 2017 05:34 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 
Form
Name: Slatepelt
Age: 45 moons (when she died)
Gender: she-cat
Brief physical description: Slatepelt has short grey fur (pressumed by the prefix) and bright brown eyes. She has black speckles on her pelt, and as white underbelly.
Brief personality description: Slatepelt is a quite cat, however; when she sees her love, Shinefang, she usually has hints of remorse and pride in her voice.
Position you want: Slatepelt, former mate
Plot ideas: Slatepelt visits in Starclan guiding him
Brief summary or relationship then versus now: Before she died she was happy and only wanted kits, when she died, and he was a warrior she dreamed he’d find a mate and have kits, and never forget her. When he becomes a warrior, she feels proud, but knows they are no longer able to be mates when he joins the ranks of Starclan.

Name: Fennelheart
Age: 45 moons old
Gender: she-cat
Brief physical description: slick brown fur green eyes
Brief personality description: Fiecy and loyal bad past involving DF, which is why she’s harsh with young cats scaring them about ti
Position you want: Apprentice 2
Plot ideas: Noop
Brief summary or relationship then versus now: As an apprentice she was cunning and evil now she’s sweet, but also terrifying. She’s proud of Shinefang.
Form
Name: Whisperkit
Age: under a moon old
Gender: she-kit
Brief physical description: grey fur unknown eye color technically blue
Brief personality description: soft, sweet song voice, happy personality
Position you want: one of the three kits that died while Slate was in labor, she’d be in Starclan watching her father heal the clan
Plot ideas: Whisperkit could be the cat who he goes to at the starcave every time if you know how each cat saw a specific dead cat in the books and stuff.
Brief summary or relationship then versus now: They are still proud of him

RedHead September 26th, 2017 06:02 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 

Name: Speckledspring [Link to page]
Age: 38 Moons
Gender: Female
Brief physical description: Speckled sports a caramel-colored brown pelt, black spots dotting her pelt, and vivid blue eyes.
Brief personality description:
{I'll just give you a few of her traits, her fleshed out personality is on her page if you want to read it.}
+Resourceful || -Abrupt || +Teacherly || -Opinionated
Position you want:
Younger sister of Slatepelt (Shinefang's dead mate Slatepelt could've been a silver bengal?)
And possibly apprentice 1 or 2
Plot ideas:
-Well, since Speckled has three large litters of kits, I was thinking Shine could be slightly annoyed by the fact that his sister-in-law left him with a large amount of nieces and nephews.
-Also, if she is accepted as one of his former apprentices, that could make things interesting
-And I was thinking that, also if she is accepted, Shinefang and Speckled's son from her second litter, Flickerpaw, would have a funny relationship, if you were accepting "little annoying friends" for Shinefang.
Brief summary of relationship then versus now:
Well, then, Speckled and Shine could've got along nicely, especially if she was his apprentice as well. But then, when his mate died, Speckled became slightly upset (Because that would've been her sister), and she kind of shuts Shinefang out of her life. But then, Speckled could've realized her wrongs and try to make up with Shinefang, but with the grump he is now, it was hard for her. But she was still nice to him. Then when Speckled's own mate died, maybe she tried to go sympathize even more with Shinefang, and is now trying to include him in her life more than ever, to help him, herself, and her kits?
-Then, if Flickerpaw was Shinefang's nephew, I think that would be adorable, with just an annoying little blabbermouth coming into the medicine den all the time to annoy his uncle XD
So yeah, those are just my ideas ^^

Dust September 26th, 2017 06:10 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 
@Charmer
Name:
Slatepelt

Age:
29 moons upon death

Gender:
Cisgender Female

Brief physical description:
[ref]
Grey Mackerel tabby with darker grey stripes; Dark pink nose; White Muzzle & Toe Beans ; Warm yellow eyes; Long Whiskers & Tail

Brief personality description:
[+Playful][+Goofy][+Independent][+Affectionate][+Nurturing]
[=Ambitious] [=Helpful]
[-Spiteful][-Naive][-Dare Devil]

Position you want:
Former mate

Plot ideas:
(*rolls up sleeves* Here we go)
-Slate greets Shine in Starclan and at first they reminiscence about the past, but Shine begins to nag on why she left him and Slate get defensive which could end with them having a fight
-They make up at some point, perhaps Shine seeks out Slate to apologize?
-Slate visits Shine in his dreams. The dreams all imitate their time together as younger warriors and even one where Slate never died during her kitting
-Slate could push Shine to take on an apprentice (whenever it's decided that you're going to take on one)

Brief summary or relationship then versus now:
Once a healthy and loving relationship between the two, slatepelt now finds herself worrying about her former mate and often doubting his judgement. While Slatepelt still feels an immense amount of love for Shinefang, she can't help but be spiteful that he feels like she "left him." For a long time after her death she resented Shinefang, but those feelings slowly ebbed away as time continued forward.

Cosmo September 26th, 2017 06:11 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 

Name Slatepelt
Age 35 moons at death
Gender Female
Brief physical description
Ref | Ref
Slatepelt is named for her gray fur. It's sort of an ashy gray brown, and the spots are definitely more gray then the other parts of her body. She has a silverish grayish colored muzzle and chest, making her look dignified when she has a serious face on. Which is to say not often. It doesn't do much for her to look like anything, except to perhaps make her look different from everyone else. Slatepelt has a adorable gaze, which has gold and yellow with some green orbs, and the fact she tends to stare at cats but look cute while doing so.
Brief personality description
Caring+ | Understanding+ | Calming+
Dreamy= | Distant=| Adventurous= | Honest= | Independent=
-Easily angered | -Grumpy | -Obnoxious
Slatepelt is a cat you'll want to be near, but not for too long. She cares about everyone, and understands them, but even though she is independent and understands most things, she does not understand that some cats cat survive without her. Slatepelt feels the need to help everyone, and doesn't see why they won't let her do it as often as she would like. She calms cats easily, and with few words can make them sleep, so why don't they like that she does that? Why don't they appreciate it? Slatepelt is independent. She goes off on many adventurous by herself, and dreams about places that no cat could every dream of. She's honest about where she goes, but is easily-angered and can get defensive at times. But still, she doesn't understand why some cats don't want her help. When she is angered, she gets grumpy. Refuses to talk to other cats and many other things. She becomes obnoxious if they insist she talk to them. So hang out with her, but not to long. She'll help you, sometimes the way you want, and sometimes the way she wants.
Position you want Slatepelt, Dead mate
Plot ideas
-Slatepelt is annoyed when he receives the rank of medicine cat, she thinks that the special StarClan relationship they had had since she died, would disappear due to Shinefang being a medicine cat. He doesn't see her around StarClan for a couple moons, and when he finally does they have to make up
Brief summary or relationship then versus now
Then
She was often there for him, but clingy and not wanting him near other she-cats, always wanting kits [which I am okay with them having if you are] and hanging around near her
Now
She is hurt, despite being the one who died, and feels the relationship can not be maintained

Starfall September 26th, 2017 07:38 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 
Name: Turtlebright
Age: 20 moons
Gender: Male
Brief Physical Description: In Character page (I Pad is laggy so it would take forever to type out)
Brief Personality Description: ^^
Position you want: Apprentice 4
Plot Ideas: I was thinking that Turtle could be his last apprentice and that he encouraged Shinefang to take the roll of Medicine cat (even though I know that Starclan probably appointed him to take the roll but still, it would be cute)
Brief Summary of relationship or then versus now: So it would be cute if Shine thought of Turtle as his younger brother, since he was his last apprentice I believe that they would have a strong bonds, Turtle would have also stuck around Shinefang during his time of grieving as well.


Lawlipop September 26th, 2017 07:47 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 


Name: Slatepelt
Age: 98 moons currently (54 moons at death, or what ever time you wanted her to die)
Gender: Female
Brief physical description: She wasn't the most prettiest cat in her clan. As she grew older, many scars and scratches she wore like trophies on her body. Her shortly grown fur was as grey as her name suggests, with messy unkept fur. Her eyes were like pale yellow suns that could pierce a cat sharper than her claws ever could.
Brief personality description: Her beauty came with her personality. She is loyal to the end, so much so, it almost feels like blind devotion at times. She was not a easy cat to deal with. She didn't like to be in one place a long time, she liked to run around, she liked the feeling of ripping her claws through an enemy cat or a tasty mouse, the thrill of being a warrior is what she lived for. Living every day, constantly putting herself at risk for the sole purpose to satisfy her lust for excitement is what led to her downfall in the end.
Position you want: Ded Wifey
Plot ideas:
Brief summary or relationship then versus now: Back when she was alive, she was annoying to certain cats, and Shinefang was no exception to that group. She acts before she thinks. She responds to an injury with joy in hopes of a new scar added to her body. It was infuriating. The two got into many quarrels in their youth, so much so, a lot of their punishments for their fights would require them to be in close proximity of each other. It was torturous. So how did these two become loving mates and have kits with each other? How did the annoyed tom convince the free spirit to remain in the nursery until their kits were grown enough? Well, those torturous punishments gave them a positive toll on their relationship. Their quarrels were acts of love towards each other. Shinefang never tried to put out Slatepelt's fire, but ultimately convinced her to take more care of herself for his and their future kits' sake, hinting at his desire to have a family with her moons before they were even born.

How did Slatepelt die? Exactly how she lived, reckless and risky. A physical dispute with a group of outsiders turned bloody. Of course, the warriors were victorious, but the battle had it's share of casualties. Slatepelt was among them. She battled her opponents like she always done. Dodging them quickly and taunting them into using moves. But she got incredibly tired that day due to racing to the call for help after coming back from hunting. She moved too slowly and the outsider's claws pierced her chest, leaving a bloody gash that stained her fur. Her kits and mate mourned their loss over their mother and partner.

Being in the ranks of StarClan gave Slatepelt a more calm and wise personality. After her death, she still holds her children and mate close to her heart and worries for them a lot. She spends most of her time watching with a guarding eye and ensuring nothing bad can happen to them. The old age and grouchiness of her mate breaks her heart every second she sees him like this. When he is out hunting in the territory, she is by her side. When he sleeps, she curls up next to him. She does all the things she did when she was alive. He may never know she does this, but she does it anyways.

wickedvirtues September 26th, 2017 07:54 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 
Age: Ravenfluff
Gender: Female
Brief physical description: A very fluffy black she-cat with yellow eyes
Brief personality description: cynical-sarcastic-loyal-introverted
Position you want: Former apprentice 2
Plot ideas: Them just having a random interaction
Brief summary or relationship then versus now:
Then:
Ravenfluff, then Ravenpaw, was basically the same. Cynical, sharp-tongued, and introverted. She would protect her mentor with her life, back then.

Now:
Her personality mostly the same, Ravenfluff is still rude, but more sharp-tongued. She doesn't have as strong a connection to her mentor, but sometimes visits him randomly.

@Charmer

Role September 26th, 2017 08:33 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 
Name
Oakpaw

Age
11 moons

Gender
Female

Brief Physical Description
Oakpaw is a muscular, but tall molly with brown tabby fur. Her eyes are a bright amber. She has a twisted forepaw that is mangled, scarred, and the claws are permanently extended.

Brief Personality Description
Oakpaw is a hyperactive, friendly she-cat who is a bit down in the dumps due to her new disability. What once was extroverted and excited is now introverted and anxious. Oakpaw hates her disability with a passion, and now has a huge fear of monsters and the Thunderpath.

Position You Want
Other. Like I'll say below, maybe a father-daughter friendship?

Plot Ideas
Maybe Oakpaw meets him when she gets hurt and is prolly sent to the medicine den?

Brief Summary of Their Relationship Then Versus Now
Then:
Oakpaw would try to talk with Shinefang as she recovered, annoying him more and more. Since Oakpaw has a lot of energy, talking would be how she burned off energy as she lies around for a few days.
Now:
As they grow closer, Oakpaw and Shinefang would develop a father-daughter type relationship. The two would tease each other to no end, and occasionally Oakpaw might come to Shinefang for advice.

@Charmer

Socks September 26th, 2017 10:34 PM

Re: Finder for Shinefang
 
Name:
Servaltuft
Age:
94 moons
Gender:
Male
Brief physical description:
Click Click
Servaltuft is a lithe brown tabby tom with short fur and bright amber eyes. He has legs which seem un-proportional with his body and a short tail which makes them look longer. He has a short muzzle and a rather large bright pink nose.
Brief personality description:
Servaltuft is an optimistic cat who enjoys making friends. He's always saying things like 'look at the bright side' and despite these cheesy words can be quite successful in cheering another cat up. He is rather friendly and enjoys making friends and talking. If you spotted him in the clearing you'd most likely find him around a large group of friends. He can also be pretty annoying, even at his old age he can chat a cat's ears off with his high-pitched words and quick speaking
Position you want:
Mate of Dead Sibling
Plot ideas:
I dunno, man
Brief summary or relationship then versus now:
Before, Shinefang had found Servaltuft annoying, but bearable. He had let him talk his ear off once in a while even if he never took part in the conversation and never told him off hurtfully. Now, Shinefang hates to be around the tom, let alone listen to him talk about rabbits until sundown.



Name:
Fennecfur
Age:
37 moons
Gender:
Male
Brief physical description:
Lynx Point
Fennecfur is a mostly white young tom, with brown tabby stripes. He has darker colored fur on his face and paws, fading to cream and then white. His eyes are a wide vibrant blue color. He is a small cat, thus being named after the smallest fox, and has a large scar along his shoulders
Brief personality description:
Fennec is a quiet tom, he was born with a stutter and slurred speech so he prefers to stay silent if he can, which happens to be a lot. It's a rare thing to hear him speak, as he only does towards loved ones. He is very gentle in everything he does, even how he walks it is like his paws are barely even touching the ground at all. He is insecure about his abilities and his speech, thinking he will never be good enough in the clan.
Position you want:
Nephew
Plot ideas:
-shrugs-
Brief summary or relationship then versus now:

It's easy to tell that the relationship between uncle and nephew has changed greatly. They used to have a more playful and fun relationship, full of smiles, jokes, and stories. Nowadays they are more somber around each other. They don't have a bad relationship, they are still pretty close, just in a different way than before.


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