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Leucos June 6th, 2018 06:34 PM

Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
this is inspired by duskflight!
' There's a new world comin'. and it's just around the bend.
There's a new world comin', this one's comin' to an end.
There's a new voice callin', you can hear it if you try.
And its growin' stronger with each day that passes by.
There's a brand new mornin', rising clear and sweet and free.
There's a new day dawnin', that belongs to you and me.
Yes, a new world's comin', the one we've had visions of '


For many moons Peakclan has lived in the mountains , hunted its prey , used the caves as dens , drank from its waterfall even . But something is off...Twolegs are starting to get into the mountains exploring its rocky terrain ,fishing from the waterfalls stream even scaring off prey! Worst of all the twolegs have these red sticks that have a tiny speck of fire at the end of it and stick them on the mountain creating huge walls in it even causing some of its rocks to fall down and hit their clanmates. They wait it out for a few moons hoping that this chaos will end , but more damage has been made in that time . Yet their leader Burntstar still won't make the decision to leave ,it is their home after all soon visions of new place created by starclan start to appear in one of the clan cats dreams . Will they find a new home? Or will they stay and destroy themselves along with their home?
( I know it's not as creative as it could be but it's what I thought of any ways and I hope you guys enjoy it )

Burntstar
DustyFuzz
Flintpelt

Frecklepaw


Marbledwhisker
Thundercloud
Furzebelly
Thicketsnarl
Robinfeather
Snowyfoot
tangleclaw

Mumblepaw
Dewpaw
sparkpaw


Tansykit
Cloudkit

Cat staring in the story ?
A burntstar
B Dustyfuzz
C Dewpaw
D Thundercloud

Who may be interested
@Raven & Co
@Fuzzyfeline
@Ombre Party
@Celestial
@Silentshade

Fuzzy June 6th, 2018 07:13 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
C, Dewpaw

Leucos June 6th, 2018 07:56 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
cat chosen : Dewpaw

" Dewpaw!! " a voice called causing the she cats blue eyes to open slowly her vision blurry from exhaustions paws the silver tabby yawned loudly her body felt numb as she stood up so she gave it a good shake causing some loose hairs to escape her fur and land on the ground .Dewpaw glanced around the apprentices cave only Mumblepaw was in here in his deep sleep curled up in a tight ball ears flicking here and there , probably dreaming about chasing prey on the territory or something the poor tom always mumbled when he talked hence his name but he was a cute dorky little fella he always made her smile . She even smiled right now as she looked at him " DEWPAAAW! " the familiar voice yelled it sounded impatient causing her to groan does that furrball ever
take a break? No of course not. Starclan help me
with a sigh she walked out of the cave only to meet eyes with Sparkpaw who was looking excited yet also having a hint of mischief in his expression , his face had a grin as well causing Dewpaw to worry " your finally awake doormouse! It felt like 20 moons " Sparkpaw meowed his eyes having a shine to them this made Dewpaw cringe a bit " well I'm up now , I was enjoying a amazing dream but sadly I have to see you when I wake up . Happy now furball? " she meowed with a hint of sarcasm in her tone and tilted her head .

Sparkpaw snickered and swished his tail dismissively " aww! I'm touched . And of course Dewy! I'm always happy to see ya . But seriously you will not believe what I caught news of this morning ! Care to guess? " Sparkpaw asked with an raised eyebrow his ears twitching with excitement with Dewpaw having no other choice " what is it that you heard ? " she sighed not looking so excited about it . The tom giggled and held his head up " I overheard burntstar and Dustyfuzz have a conversation , Dustyfuzz said that she found a rather large hole in one of the sides of the mountain ! So I say let's check it out! " sparkpaw answered with a hop . Dewpaw admitted to herself that she was interested her head even tilted when he spoke but as he said let's check it out it made her eyes wide causing her to worry , what if they get hurt? What if they get in trouble !? She opened her mouth to say

A Why in starclans name would we!?
B I don't think so , id rather keep my fur on then have it be clawed off
C ok sure
D .... Why ,there's nothing important about it .

Bracken12 June 6th, 2018 08:19 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
A. Burntstar

pomegranate June 6th, 2018 08:22 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
D!!!!!!!!!
(Sass mouth here we go!)

Gone June 6th, 2018 08:30 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
D!!!

Leucos June 6th, 2018 08:42 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
Answer : D

"......Why , there's nothing important about it " she meowed in a sassy tone her eyes narrowed she was holding her ground on this argument , the two always argued ! It was like Sparkpaw was the personified version of trouble and mischief while Dewpaw was the opposite she always chose to follow the rules never taking a risk in her life . But it seemed that sparkpaw decides to ignore the rules that were set up and do What he wants . Which ticked her off . This caused Sparkpaw to look disappointed his head lowered a bit " aww geez dewy...your always such a cleanpaw...don't you ever want an adventure ? " the tom meowed looking at her with begging eyes trying to get her to go along anyways ,this Tom won't quit . A snort was Dewpaws reponse followed by " cleanpaw huh? I'm just someone who chooses to do the right thing and not get stuck having to get mousebile for getting rid of ticks from elders " she snapped loosing her temper with him rather quickly .Sparkpaw perked his head up at that looking.... Wounded almost his mouth was open a tiny bit trying find something to shoot back at her finally he spoke after about a few minutes " oh yeah!? Well fine . I'm going by myself then " he huffed and turned around his tail now in the air as he began to trot off his head high once again nose in the air .

Dewpaw huffed her mouth dropped open how mouse brained is he!? It's against the rules for an apprentice to leave the camp without an older cat!!! she growled a bit now shaking her head she ran after him and stopped after a few mouse lengths she needed to stop him! " Sparkpaw you mouse brain you can't ! " She shouted which may have woken the whole clan by now but she didn't care . Sparkpaw stopped suddenly and looked over his shoulder at her with a glare his eyes like daggers " oh? I thought you didn't care . " he snapped making Dewpaw stop in her tracks as well she lowered her head with her ears folded back a hiss escaped " I don't care about the ' journey ' I care that your gonna get yourself hurt . It's also breaking the rules fleabrain " she snapped back . Sparkpaw growled " I'm going . You can't stop me. " he growled and ran off he went around the river and climbed the ledge of a rock that was near by faster then you can say ' silverpelt' . Dewpaw scoffed "oh you insufferable little brat! " she yelled at him . She didn't know what to do afterwards , but as she thought she decided to

A go after him
B let him leave
C tell burntstar
D go hunting

Pluto June 7th, 2018 10:58 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
A!

Leucos June 8th, 2018 10:46 AM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
Answer : A
Dewpaw rolled her eyes with a huff this will be a great reason as to why I am late for my lessons for Furzebelly the silver tabby crouched and dashed off she made it to the beginning of the waterfalls river which was the smallest part she couldn't make it across the middle of it she was too small , she held her breath now sharpening her claws so she can get a better grip on the slippery stone , the stone ledge that touches the water is always just a tad slippery when the water splashes , it's dangerous for kits , still just as dangerous for apprentices . Dewpaw leaped across to the other side thankfully managing to make it on to the stone it made her cringe a bit as she felt her claws scrape against the hard surface , her ice blue eyes looked at where Sparkpaw was he was now completely on top of the rocks surface he looked over his shoulder at her and stick his tongue out then dashed off leaping onto another one with more ease then the last . Her eyes narrowed at this , can't this Tom just follow the rules? No of course not it makes more work when he breaks them for others . Dewpaw made it to the same rock and crouched her nose pointing to the sky she moved all of her strength to her hind legs and jumped up her front legs outstretched paws widened and claws out once she felt the edge of it under her paws she pulled her left hind leg up leaving the other one to dangle she placed her hind paw on the front of the rough surface and pushed upwards next was her right hind leg now doing the same thing , it felt like 100 moons before she was able to get on top along with a lot of struggling . She was panting a bit once she made it she looked over her own shoulder at the camp her ears folded back in guilt for leaving but who else was gonna save this mouse brains pelt? She looked at the apprentices cave which was on the left
beside the water fall the warriors cave was also on the left but 4 Fox lengths away from the apprentices cave, the leaders cave was behind the waterfall , the kits cave was 5 Fox lengths from where she was it was also the cave where queens stayed . Exhaling the tabby dashed off after him leaping to the other one he was just on she saw sparkpaw walking slowly across a small ledge that was only big enough for a squirrel ! Sparkpaw nearly at a corner who had his tail up high placed each paw in front of one another carefully while looking forward if he looked down he will probably freak . Dewpaw gulped keeping her ears folded back I've never done this before ! Furzebelly told me not to walk on narrow ledges ! Every cat has common sense not to with a sigh she pressed her body against the mountains side placing one paw in front of the other as well a small breeze blew against them making her fur be blown backwards also making her have to squint , she was a few Fox lengths away when she saw that orange tabby tail disappear behind the corner fear was slowly washing over her body for the fact that both of them may fall to there deaths . no dewpaw! Don't be a mouse , your a peakclan apprentice we have no fear! Mice run away when they are afraid you aren't and besides no one else is gonna save this brat .

Gathering her courage she continued forward feeling her fur scrapping against the hard surface she thought it might actually be clawed off by it , she didn't know when to be relieved or not when she made it around the corner she saw sparkpaw on top of another rock making her shake her head once again " Sparkpaw! Get down from there and let's return to camp . Your gonna fall to your death if you continue on . Please " she meowed and half begged hoping it would be enough to persuade him to return she didn't want his death to be on her mind " think about your mother Robinfeather! " she added/shouted in her last attempt the two cats did look alike but their voices and body structure were different . Sparkpaw flicked his right ear now looking back at the she cat his eyes narrowed he was a stubborn thing with a twitch of his tail he said " I'll be fine cleanpaw. Sorry Dewy but I ain't leaving when I've made it this far I'm gonna find that hole ! " he meowed stubbornly his eyes having a gleam in them Dewpaw bared her teeth at that she crept forward to the rock and jumped up repeating the same process getting up there a bit easier then last , she held her head up and puffed her chest out " how many brain cells do you have in there?your gonna die! I'm not gonna keep on being your kitsitter every time you mess up. More likely this is gonna be your last time if you don't return with me. " she meowed sternly . The Orange tabby growled his ears folded back fluffing his fur to make himself seem larger then normal but it wasn't working with Dewpaw so he lashed his tail " its my choice . And your not my mother so don't tell me what to do! Besides I'll be back before Robinfeather wakes up any ways ,it's still early " he growled .

Dewpaw snarled and hissed " that's it were going back anyways wether you like it or not " she hissed she tried to get behind him so she can Push him forward but Sparkpaw struck her face with his claws unsheathed leaving a tiny scratch on her cheek and bleed causing her to wince but she wasn't stopping she wasn't having any of his mouse brained acts today . The tom wasn't stopping either he meowed and moved a bit so he was facing her but as he took the final step that allowed him to do so he stepped on the edge of the rock and slipped off of it causing him to Yowl he managed to grab the edge by his front paws his claws digging into the stone " Dewy! H-help" he whined as his hind legs flailed about his breathing started to quicken there wasn't any surface to safely fall on to from here it was just a long drop to a rather painful death . Dewpaw was wide eyed as her head perked up fear washed over her body but she heard what sounded like thunder almost , how can there be thunder when it's a sunny day? Soon she felt the surface underneath her paws start to shake causing her to wobble as she caught her balance her eyes caught a pebble landing beside her then another and another till a waterfall of them hit her and the tom who was still holding on for dear life . Dewpaw shook her head and looked up only for her mouth to widen and her ears to fold back three or four huge rocks were plummeting towards them!! Starclan what is this!? It's never happened so close to camp... " what are you W-waiting for dewy!? Help me! " Sparkpaw shrieked and closed his eyes as he was met by the same pebbles that hit the she cat . Dewpaw looked at the tom then back up at the rocks , she had to think fast she can't save herself and him . So she decided to

A Save Sparkpaw and possibly get killed
B save herself

Leucos June 10th, 2018 12:40 PM

Re: Peakclan : Chaos ( interactive story )
 
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