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the sting of disappointment [p]
Palequiver - Palequiver had meticulously prepared for this next session following the unfortunate unraveling of her previous attempt. Her perception of his distress fueled her own; she’d been unable to eat, couldn’t sleep without tossing or turning, desperate to mend the rift that’d been created. It’d been terrible, not because of him—never—but because it just had been the wrong move under the circumstances. This time, however, she had an ace up her sleeve. A surprise. @BEAR. |
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Every time she called herself Mentor, he contemplated ripping that away from her. It was terribly petty, Coldpaw knew - but he liked the thought of tearing her down further and further, depriving her of what little hope she bled through the use of his nickname for her. It wasn't a term of endearment by any means, she was grasping for anything - and he relished in her desperation.
As she neared, Coldpaw watched her with a unveiled displeasure. A surprise, truly? He'd sooner close his eyes and walk off a cliff than listen to her kit-like 'close your eyes dearie!' "What is it now, Mentor? Here to bore me again like last time?" At this rate, he might turn gray before she did anything truly compelling. [ @Fawn ] |
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Palequiver - Palequiver bit the inside of her cheek to keep her smile from slipping an inch, resolute in the determination that her surprise she’d curated just for him would chase his bout of the grumpies away in a flash. “Why, if I told you that would defeat the purpose,” she responded, too upbeat. “Let us go see it, shall we? Remember, eyes closed! Follow the sound of my voice.”@BEAR. |
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Coldpaw merely squinted his eyes to get her moving, but the second her back was turned they were right open. He wasn't in the mood for these childish games she played, but this was an excuse to get out of camp again..
The trek through the territory was brisk. Coldpaw was more interested in their surroundings than Mentor, but when she started yapping again he glanced over. Then paused. . .. "'Surprise!'" You call this a surprise? Like it's a good thing?" His voice had lowered, bordering to a hiss - but not quite; for all his frustrations he needed to stay in control. "Are you mocking me, Mentor?" Trying to one-up him with a real live beehive, not that unworthy shell he attempted to bomb her with. He didn't want to be paw-held with finding bees, it defeated the purpose and this was a colossal waste of his time. Coldpaw lashed his tail, lip pulled back. "Enough of this, Mentor. Show me something worth my while - train me, like you're supposed to." He'd salvage this, make a dungy situation better. Maybe Mentor could redeem herself today... he doubted it. [ @Fawn ] |
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Palequiver - The corners of Palequiver’s grin drooped when the surprise bees didn’t land with the anticipated joy, but Coldpaw had always reacted in more… subtle ways to her affection. Breath shallowing, she scoured his expression, seeking out what she wanted to see in the unstated: he hadn’t left yet, no storming off, and that was something. That meant he couldn’t truly hate it, could he? @BEAR. |
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Excitement.. as if Mentor would know what exciting was! He was certain she'd miss it if it smacked her in the face. No matter, he would fix this. Training would be a.. distraction from her misdeeds. Yes.
He only huffed a little bit when she called him clever. Of course he was. Coldpaw was the smartest cat in ShadowClan - no, the whole forest. One day they'd all see that. "What, are we squirrels now, Mentor? Is that why you brought me here?" Bee hives, Bumblestar, tree climbing... it all made sense! Disgusting. "We're ShadowClan, Mentor, or did you forget? Teach me how to control them before I perish from boredom." [ @Fawn ] |
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Palequiver - “Mind the pricklies, dearie. You never know when a most unseemly creature might give chase, and one must always flee with dignity.” Palequiver could’ve shuddered at the thought of her precious boy a tail-length ahead of any mangy canine hoping to get its jaws on him. Teaching him self-sufficiency was a dreaded process she warred with herself over, but the fear kept her on track for training a future warrior rather than focusing only on training a future son.@BEAR. |
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"Anything foolish enough to target me will be sorely mistaken!" He was one of ShadowClan's greatest, did Mentor forget? Coldpaw wasn't some mewing kitten in need of protection, he was fierce and powerful. Regal.
Despite his open complaints, he took to her words like a fly in honey - finally, something worthy of his attention! If she spent half the time being this intriguing, maybe he'd value her words more. Yes, he was ShadowClan's finest silk whisper, a piece of art to be admired and praised. Then Mentor demonstrated, and the calculation gif briefly played in Coldpaw's head. Was that a ...a FAILURE? Of course, she'd lure him in with a false sense of competence and then disappoint him! At least he might be able to upstage her. If she couldn't do it, surely he could. "You must have failed your art form lesson." Then he'd go on to try to replicate it - BUT BETTER! - mimicking the soul of being the ghostly cat he was born to be. When he was done trying to conceal his snow white fur in darkness - and he was confident that he'd done it superbly, he straightened his pelt with a snort. "Unlike me, Mentor. I never miss my mark." [ @Fawn ] |
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Palequiver - Palequiver’s eyes gleamed with feverish pride as Coldpaw delivered his proclamation and set to demonstrating his stealth prowess, her heart fluttering at what she perceived as a mirror of her teachings — the sheer, blinding majesty of him. Oh, he was magnificent, wasn’t he?@BEAR. |
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She talked, but he was past the point of listening, more invested in the praise to be had at his marvelous display of stealth. "It couldn't be any less." He was power and control, and darkness bent to his will.
"I am already legendary," It was almost a hiss, stolen beneath pearl teeth as he twisted to reclaim his spot among the shadows. Like a snake through tall grass, he prowled - prepared for an unsuspecting victim. It wasn't too different from hunting, just more... dignified. He could get used to this. The thought of approaching an enemy's camp - the last time they'd done that was when RiverClan was driven out and might as well be ancient history. No, he wanted blood! To show their enemies he was not to be trifled with, that ShadowClan was their superior (and he was The Most.) A god among cats, their lifeblood reflected in his eyes - "EEP!" Too close to the hive, a particularly grumpy bee decided it had enough of his attitude. His delicate pink nose found itself the victim of its stinger and he recoiled back sharply, swatting at his muzzle as liquid threatened to spill from his eyes - it hurt! It hurt! And his beautiful snoot --- would it survive such disfigurement??? His claws caught hold of the bee and he angrily squashed it, a growl unbeefitting him escaping his throat. [ @Fawn ] |
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