[Momotaro]

Originally Posted by TwilightpawTheSmolBean

(sorry it took me a while to reply. i had issues with my dog and it exhausted me so i took a nap.) Twilightpaw smiled and walked over to Mistkit. "here, let me help you." she said, showing him how to get into a proper hunters crouch. "your hind is too high in the air and your tail needs to be a bit lower to the ground." She instructed, watching him correct his crouch. After that was done, she got into a hunters crouch. "now, prey is pretty hard to catch, so you have to be careful. A good way to make sure your prey doesnt smell your scent is by staying downwind. pay attention to the way the wind is blowing and stay in that direction." She said, putting a pinecone a few pawsteps away from Mistkit. "now, move as close as you can to the pinecone in front of you without being too close, and pounce." she said. She knew the kit couldn't see that well, but she was hoping he could see the pinecone a little bit, since she didnt put it very far away. and if he couldn't then that was just something they could try and improve on. (sorry this was so long)

Mistkit changed his position into what Twilightpaw instructed and glee filled his eyes. "Your a great mentor!" He squealed happily, but fell silent when realised he was supposed to hunting, he put is paws carefully on the ground, not wanting to make a sound. His tail bobbed slightly, but it was hardly noticeable. The small grey kit curled into a ball and leaped through the air; power and strength propelling him forwards. His accuracy; however, was terrible, and he landed face first into the all of the den. "Ow......." He mewed, sadness in his huge, misty, Amber eyes. "Maybe we should go into the clearing? Not that it will make a difference." The tabby walked over to the pinecone and dug his unusually large claws into it. He sighed and turned to Twilightpaw. "I'll never be a good warrior, I can barely see in front of me and it gets worse every day!"

(It's good that your post was long, long posts equals more information to work with which means better posts!)