[Dolomedes]

 

Originally Posted by sylvia26

 

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"they never noticed me...so what was the point..."
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Hollypaw of thunderclan (she)
10 moons old
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☾☽☾☽✿❀✿ she sighed as she listened to rosepaw, why was she wasting her time on her? this was dumb...hollypaw didn't deserve this...she sighed again as she copied the other apprentice dropping into a crouch (rolled an 8) she wobbled a bit and huffed, clearly upset. so she tried again, (rolled a 16) she fixed her stature a bit and sighed, and to be extra she tried to creep forward (rolled a 10) she was able to do so but not perfectly... "I'm doing this wrong aren't I...?" she asked in a low and broad tone. ✿❀✿☾☽☾☽

@Dolomedes (i was rolling a 20d, 1-10 is not so great 11-16 is did a little better and 17-20 is better to great)

"The Rose Petal Princess!"

Rosepaw
#TheBlossoming

"It's good. You can't expect it to be perfect on the first try." Rosepaw didn't even hold herself to that standard as it was unachievable and would only drive herself mad with it. Actually, Hollypaw was catching on very quickly. The russet tabby nodded, pleased, and spoke as such to the older apprentice, "I can't say for certain, but you should be aiming to keep your paws light and your body as center as possible so that you make little noise as possible as you stalk. Oh! Also be careful of your tail, make sure its low and doesn't hit anything." Rosepaw dropped into her own crouch and started to practice her own stalk forward. It was something she wanted to practice more before she went out with Brackenclaw.