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TheNyanCatMinecart
Thank you. This really means a lot to me, and your writing is absolutely amazing. You perfectly Characterized Mossberry and Shrikefeather, and the little remark Mossberry made about the cure was so accurate to real life, that I'm not sure how you were able to know that, lol. The only things I would change were that Dawnsparkle did not die, she just broke up with Shrike, and Hollysweet died early. Although, I never told you these things, so it's perfectly ok. But other than that, this nearly brought me to tears, which is an amazing feat, lol. I will definitely be paying extra, and I'll come back to commission you again soon.