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gs29513
Rosebriar saw a RiverClan warrior headed toward her and felt a stinging slap on the head that ruffled her fur. Letting out a sound that sounded angry and shocked, something like a breath and a gasp, the warrior crouched down. This she-cat had her claws unsheathed, so why couldn’t she? Sliding them out, Rosebriar hissed, lunging at the she-cat. Her aim was to knock her over so that she could pin her down.
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mareenakit
(Don’t forget the fighting rules. You can’t explicitly land blows on another character. It has to be something like “Silverpool aimed for the warrior’s back, hoping to unbalance him” and not “Silverpool landed on the warrior’s back to unbalance him.”)
Wolffang felt something land on his back. As the she-cat tried to land, he shook himself. She might be a fat RiverClan cat, but he was muscled and large with some of the leanness of a regular WindClan cat. Spinning around, he growled, fighting thr urge to unsheathe his claws. Then he lunged at Silverpool, hoping to knock her over. He was much bigger than she was, after all, and he wasn’t going to lose to a fat RiverClan she-cat!