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Old November 27th, 2020, 07:33 PM
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Main Character Form:
Name: Night Runner
Gender: She-kit
Age: 2 moons
Personality: Serious and curious, tries to be good but can find herself eavesdropping at times. Ambiverted, up for a fun game but still unusually serious for a young kit. Quite protective and a bit nervous around those who she doesn’t trust, also a little snappy.
Appearance: Big she-kit who is oddly lithe for her age, with short, thick, sleek fur that is a pure, dark shade of night-black and easily blends into things. It also makes her lighter features (nose, claws, teeth) stand out. Luminous yellow-amber eyes.
Rank: Rogue kit
Etc: N/A I guess

Side Character Form:
Name: Sunshine
Gender: She-cat
Appearance: Small and plump, rounded head and paws. Medium-length, thick, soft, fluffy fur, has a neck tuft, bushy, thick, and fluffy tail. Yellow fur, swirling pale creamy-yellow stripes, muzzle and neck tuft are the same colors. Large, round, wide, very luminous, bright orange eyes.

Side Character
Name: Moon Shade
Gender: Tom
Appearance: Big, lithe tom with short, thick, sleek fur, white pelt, dark gray polka-dot spots. Light gray design that looks like shading on both sides, deep, dark green eyes, tear in right ear. Short tail

Side Character-
Name: Dawn Light
Gender: She-kit
Appearance: Small she-kit with a rounded belly, slightly shortened tail. Medium-length, thick, soft, sleek fur, dark gray pelt. Bottom half of legs and upper half of tail are orange and yellow. Large, round, wide light green eyes

Side Character:
Name: Gorge
Gender: Tom
Appearance: Tall tom with medium-length, sleek black fur. White paws and brown splotches. Narrowed, ice-blue eyes

Story:
Simple Plot: Family of four (Sunshine, Moon Shade, Night Runner, and Dawn Light) let a rogue, Gorge, live with them. Gorge was kind and helpful, but has begun acting weird. Story starts with the parents deciding to talk to him privately, tell kits to stay in their hidden forest clearing where it’s safe. Dawn Light follows them, Night Runner follows so that her sister doesn’t get hurt. Stumble upon Gorge trying to manipulate them into joining, they say no. He kills the parents, Dawn Light reveals them, he kills Dawn Light as well and tries to get Night Runner to join him. She says no and runs far away, collapsing outside a barn.
Time Of Year: Near the middle of newleaf
Character Factions: All rogues
Other Details: They live in a forest full of foxes, maybe one could play as a small plot device? @Willowfern
One question though, Joining what?
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