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[shaae_26]

Originally Posted by FrostCat

For @Sky13

Name: Slatenose
Rank: Warrior
Clan: RiverClan
Gender: Trans FtM
Age: 15
Sex: Homosexual
Advanced Looks: Gray tom with silver tabby stripes and gray muzzle with pale blue eyes.
Personality: Rebellious, out-spoken
Backstory: When Slatekit was born, she was rejected by his mother because he was a half-Clan cat, though no one knows that, and to this day no one knows it. Slatekit was raised by (RiverClan queen) and grew close to one of her sons (RiverClan tom). Her apprentice ceremony was postponed by almost four moons because she was always sneaking out of camp because she prefers the peace and quiet. When she finally became an apprentice, she despised every moment of it. Each day she felt more and more like she wasn't the way she was meant to be. About a moon before her apprentice ceremony, she realized that she identified as a male, not a female. He took on the name Slatenose, and continued to serve his Clan, speaking out when he thought a decision made was the wrong one. But he has yet to tell anyone that he was male now, or that he loves (RiverClan tom).
(Please tell me if I worded anything wrong with trans-gender, I don't really know much about that type of stuff)

(You worded everything well, but there are some mistakes in the bio. First off you said 'his mother' in the begining, and then in the end, i think you meant a moon before her warrior ceremony, not apprentice.)
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Otherwise, thank you! Sending KK now

[Raven~]

Originally Posted by Sky13

(You worded everything well, but there are some mistakes in the bio. First off you said 'his mother' in the begining, and then in the end, i think you meant a moon before her warrior ceremony, not apprentice.)
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Otherwise, thank you! Sending KK now

Ok, thanks!