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March 19th, 2017, 03:09 PM
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mapless wanderer
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*gasp* Ludi's writing a STORY!
I'm writing a story on Quotev, and I would like some feedback on it. I also wouldn't mind if anyone wants to co-author it. The form for co-authoring is down below.
Chapters
[ Prologue | Caught in Cobwebs ]
Form for Authors
Quotev Username:
Writing Sample:
Typical days online:
Feel free to post any feedback you have!
Last edited by Ludicrous Lunacy; March 19th, 2017 at 03:09 PM.
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March 20th, 2017, 06:44 PM
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Property of Dean W
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Re: *gasp* Ludi's writing a STORY!
Quotev Username: TehDerpyShoelace
Writing Sample: Here and Here
Typical days online: Saturday, Sunday, sometimes during the weekdays around 4:30-5:30.
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Last edited by FlashFanatic; March 20th, 2017 at 07:23 PM.
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March 20th, 2017, 06:47 PM
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황 할린
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Re: *gasp* Ludi's writing a STORY!
Form for Authors
Quotev Username: SlytherinQuittage
Writing Sample: Here and these are short story's, Here
Typical days online: Every Darn Day
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안녕하세요 . こんにちは . 你好 . Hello!!
It's me Mario! No No No, It's Harin. I've gone by quite a few things in my time here, Aashka, being a more well known one.
I'm a big kpop fan, stanning BTS, Nu'est, Got7, Stray Kids, SHINee, Oneus, Onewe and NCT.
I don't RP as much anymore(if any) but i'm still here if you wanna talk, and I have no problem making a whole new character to RP with you, just send me a message!
녕히 계세요 . じゃあね . 再见 . Goodby!!
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March 20th, 2017, 09:11 PM
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It’s ya boi nighty
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Re: *gasp* Ludi's writing a STORY!
@ Ludicrous Lunacy
For feed back, I noticed in the first line, it's secons, just a small typo.
"In one sat a elegant, pale and thin girl..." I would change the 'a' to 'an' course this could just be me and the way I talk but idk lol
Other than that it looks great! Keep up the work, I can't wait to read more 
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Last edited by goddess of ducks; March 20th, 2017 at 09:11 PM.
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