To the Moon and Back { P }

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Originally Posted by sock

(its shocking how well the characters are written, like, you get the characters thoughts and feelings behind the diolauge, amd its so on point! One of the things i especially love is how Wheatley will go on and on for PARAGRAPHS just TALKING, and its the best thing ive ever read)

She shrugged. She'd never had much need for a name before this (from what she could recall), but the thought of having one intruiged her.

(Lololol. Did you get the pm I sent you?)

*Jessica asked if she had anyone she liked*

*Ciara sat next to the girl, smiling, saying her dress looked really nice*

[sock]

Originally Posted by CreeperLover649

(Lololol. Did you get the pm I sent you?)

*Jessica asked if she had anyone she liked*

*Ciara sat next to the girl, smiling, saying her dress looked really nice*

(I did! I'll have a look at it on like, thursday, bc rn i dont have my school computer... long story haha. You started reading Blue Sky yet? I got my friend Jacob to read it, and he has a lot of critisisms for every tinylittle thing, and its so annoying :'D)

She looked at the girl, Ciara, who had mentioned her dress. She looked at it herself, examining it for a moment until she got bored of staring at the silky white fabric. She then turned her ghostly gaze to more interesting things, like the scar on Ciara's eye.

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Originally Posted by sock

(I did! I'll have a look at it on like, thursday, bc rn i dont have my school computer... long story haha. You started reading Blue Sky yet? I got my friend Jacob to read it, and he has a lot of critisisms for every tinylittle thing, and its so annoying :'D)

She looked at the girl, Ciara, who had mentioned her dress. She looked at it herself, examining it for a moment until she got bored of staring at the silky white fabric. She then turned her ghostly gaze to more interesting things, like the scar on Ciara's eye.

(Ok. No, I haven't. LOL)

*Ciara's scar was long and ugly, stretching from slightly above her left eyebrow to slightly below her left eye*

*Her left eye was completely covered by the scar itself, her flesh mangled*

*Claw marks could be seen on the scar, sealing it shut*

*Long and deep claw marks*

*The eye scar however didn't look very dirty, in fact, it looked rather clean*

*Some blood stains were seen here and there as well as some blueish ooze stained where the claw marks were*

[sock]

Originally Posted by CreeperLover649

(Ok. No, I haven't. LOL)

*Ciara's scar was long and ugly, stretching from slightly above her left eyebrow to slightly below her left eye*

*Her left eye was completely covered by the scar itself, her flesh mangled*

*Claw marks could be seen on the scar, sealing it shut*

*Long and deep claw marks*

*The eye scar however didn't look very dirty, in fact, it looked rather clean*

*Some blood stains were seen here and there as well as some blueish ooze stained where the claw marks were*

(well, you better get to it bc its the best thing to ever exist, and im almost done with it)

She studied the blue ooze, and then looked up at Jessica.

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Originally Posted by sock

(well, you better get to it bc its the best thing to ever exist, and im almost done with it)

She studied the blue ooze, and then looked up at Jessica.

(I will soon)

*Jessica was mumbling names under her breath*

"Moon... Jessie... Catrina... Cianna... Fiona..."

*Ciara asked what the girl had been looking at*

[sock]

Originally Posted by CreeperLover649

(I will soon)

*Jessica was mumbling names under her breath*

"Moon... Jessie... Catrina... Cianna... Fiona..."

*Ciara asked what the girl had been looking at*

(theres a part where Wheatley accidentally deletes the color yellow from his visual processor lmao)

She didnt respond to Ciara, and watched the movements of Jessica's mouth, involuntarily copying them silently.

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Originally Posted by sock

(theres a part where Wheatley accidentally deletes the color yellow from his visual processor lmao)

She didnt respond to Ciara, and watched the movements of Jessica's mouth, involuntarily copying them silently.

(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOO)

*Jessica kept on going*

*Ciara watched with a smile*

(You can pick a name for the girl that Jessica mumbled under her breath)

[sock]

Originally Posted by CreeperLover649

(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOO)

*Jessica kept on going*

*Ciara watched with a smile*

(You can pick a name for the girl that Jessica mumbled under her breath)

(LMAO theres also this kid that refers to him as "Chell's Monster" XD)

"Ca... tri... na..." She repeated softly, seemingly testing the name out. "Yes. Catrina."[/FONT][/CENTER]

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Originally Posted by sock

(LMAO theres also this kid that refers to him as "Chell's Monster" XD)

"Ca... tri... na..." She repeated softly, seemingly testing the name out. "Yes. Catrina."[/FONT][/CENTER]

(LOLOLOLOLOL)

*Jessica looked at the girl*

"Catrina? That's what you want your name to be?"

"Nice choice."

[sock]

Originally Posted by CreeperLover649

(LOLOLOLOLOL)

*Jessica looked at the girl*

"Catrina? That's what you want your name to be?"

[COLOR=Ciara"]"Nice choice."[/COLOR]

She nodded.