Mountainclan (Not for Beginners!)

[Herontail]

Originally Posted by vixenandwillowlikecookie

The leader panted looking around " shes not here she was so calm the current must of pulled her someplace " she mewed ( i wonr save her.... unles you ant me to )

QUOTE=EclipsemoonXD;76566]Kestrelpaw leaped away as Starlingpatch was pulled to safety. She barely registered Tsunamiflight's voice as her hind paw slipped on a loose rock, the mud holding it to the edge of the cliff made slick by rain. She scrabbled at the slippery mud as she slowly slid over the edge. "Dapplesnow helo me!" She cried, just before the mud beneath her paws gave way, dropping her into the seething floodwaters below. The impact jarred the apprentice, and the tide ripped her to and fro as she hung limp with shock. The cold water chilled her and soaked through her wet fur. The medice cat apprentice tried to fight to the surface, but she could no longer tell which way was up and which way was down. StarClan help me! She thought in panic as her vision began to cloud over. Then she could hang on to consciousness no more, and Kestrelpaw slipped into dark oblivion.

(She’s not dead, but your charries should think she is, don't try to save her...)[/QUOTE]

(@vixenandwillowlikecookie Look at the last line)

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No, have Tsunamiflight go back to the cave thing the Clan is hiding in, defeated. Have her be sad, and let Dapplenose know 'she's gone' and they continue on without her. Btw, is it okay if she has a drem from StarClan? Just her mother and siblings coming to encourage her, and Silentstar assuring her he's okay in StarClan. Then they could tell her she needs to go back to MountainClan?)

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Bump for @Lyra and @vixenandwillowlikescookies)

[lyra]

(Sorry! Yes Kestrelpaw can have the starclan dream thing. And I forgot to mention that I won't be roleplaying as much as I used to due to life and all that trash, so don't expect me to reply right away ) Starlingpaw rolled her eyes, her face clearly showing disappointment, but at the same time showing relief. She was scared that the two warriors would ignore her and find there own moss that was far away from camp. The good thing was that the storm had calmed down. The harsh, icy rain turned into a slight drizzle and the furious winds turned into a small, but still fur-ruffling, breeze. Looking below where they were standing, the apprentice saw that the flood water had increased rather quickly over the short time the clan was in the cave. She thought she saw a flash of fur amidst the water, but thought she was seeing things and turned back to face the warriors. The only thing Starlingpaw didn't know was hat the thing she saw was Kestrelpaw. She looked back up to the moss and meowed," It looks really steep. We'll have to be careful." She finally understood why they had to be careful after looking below her. One mistake and a cat could slip into the raging flood waters and die.

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Grayear let out a long sigh of relief as Starlingpaw finally understood the precaution in walking on the mountains. "Remember that when you're a warrior." Grayear slid in front of Starlingpaw. "Also, good eyesight. " The warrior brushed his tail over Starlingpaw's back as he passed before padding up the slope and unsheathing his claws suddenly understanding how it would help him. Grayear grasped the few pawholds available as he moved towards the moss. Even though the clan would most likely not be staying in the cave for too long they could still use the moss gathered to build new nests in their rebuilt camp.

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When Kestrelpaw woke, she found herself standing atop a starlit mountain. A gentle breeze ruffled her fur, and she could see the whole territory from her vantage point. "Where am I?" She breathed in wonder.

"StarClan," a voice answered behind her, making her jump. Kestrelpaw whirled around toward the scource of the voice. A beutiful golden-furred she cat padded toward her, trailed by three kits. The first kit was a brown tabby tom with a white blaze on his chest. The second was an orange she cat who looked almost exactly like Kestrelpaw, just with a white blaze on her chest along with the white paw and tail. The third was a golden-furred copy of his mother, green eyes gleaming with curiosity.

"Am I dead?" Kestrelpaw's eyes widened in shock. She tried to remember what happened, but water was all that filled her mind. The rushing brown and blue covered with foam.

The golden she-cat surprised her with a purr of laughter. "Not quite yet, dear." Her expression turned scarily serious, "but you do not have much time."

"What do you mean, who are you?" Kestrelpaw asked, panic clouding her thoughts.

"My name is Goldensun, this is Mudkit, Sunkit, and Hawkkit. I am your mother, these are your siblings." Goldensun responded gently.

Kestrelpaw was shocked. Her sibling snapped her out of it, pouncing on her and laughing. She pulled them all to her and licked them all on the head.

"I wish I didn’t have to break this up, but Kestrelpaw, you will die if you do not wake up soon. Your body is cold and wet, and only getting colder. You must find your way back to MountainClan. They need you. They can't find your body. They believe you are dead. You need to find them." Goldensun meowed urgently.

"What if they've already moved on? What if they don't wait to see if they're wrong? What if-" Kestrelpaw choked,"What if Dapplenose already has a new apprentice?" She finished quietly, fighting back tears.

"Then you must work quickly to get back to them. Now wake up my little one, I love you," Goldensun touched Kestrelpaw's nose with her own, and the starry mountain faded around her. The last thing she heard was her mother's warning voice, "Beware the one who will win your heart," then she was gone and Kestrelpaw woke up.

She coughed, water spilling out of her lungs and feverishly opened her eyes.

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Ooooh, who is this heart winning cat's name? XD.)

[wren]

It was over, everything, her world crashed around before her. Dapplesnow looked down into the gurgling water tears streaming from her face and falling to the surging white waves only fox lengths below. Her chest burned with a sudden hatred for herself, kestrelpaw was dead. Only because she was trying to save starlingpaw, the alrentice was then saved by tusamistar adapplesnow waited to follow, then kestrelpaw fell. She blinked back tears and started to breath in deeply. She was going to hyperventilate. Taking deep raspy breaths she dug her claws into the ground raking up moss and Debre, perhaps she should rid of herself.. Screaming GET ANOTHER MEDICNE CAT! before being swallowed by waves and ying the same way kestrelpaw did. She bit back a scream and turned away from the water and trotted up the cliffside. She would demand to go search for her. She would demand go search for her and sif she was not found alive. She choked back a sob at the thought of seeing her apprentice dead, they would bury her next to silentstar, next to the camp where she would heave wanted to die as an elder, passing her medince cat duties to the next. She looked away. And when I die. I will be next to her. She was my only family.

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Cherrysplash flicked her tailher clouded gaze servaying the cave. Before long the elder was padding to the entrance of the bare and dull area. Poking her head out the elder was dappled with a few rain drops but that was all. Cherrysplash watched Dapplesnow for a moment before approaching the medicine cat,"Are you alright?" She mewed letting her tail touch the grieving she-cat's shoulder. Certainly Dapplesnow would tell her what was wrong. And where Kestralpaw is. The she-cat thought silently and as if the answer came she mewed softly,"I understand what you feel." The thought of Silentstar and her kits hit the she-cat like a rock," I feel the same way about Silentstar." The elder didn't want to give too much away about her relationship with the leader but needed to give Dapplesnow some comfort.

[wren]

@Goose

Dapplesnow nearly jumped when she felt the touch of another cat. She turned her gaze towards cherrysplash. A well known elder of mountainclan. She flicked her tail and looked back down to the water. "I'm not okay" she murmur sifting her head to gaze across the gorge. Past the gurgling white water. "You don't know what it feels like to see your.. Whatever she was to me kestrelpaw meant a lot. My only friend" she looked away crane her neck the other way, a deep sigh escaped her mouth and teeny noise followed. Tears streamed from her cheeks, "thank you cherrysplash, I mean for being here, I appreciate it" she meows softly