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December 24th, 2016, 10:01 PM
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Re: River of Sorrow
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Originally Posted by Skybird™
I like him
But I think I might wait to see who the mother will be
As whoever rps them will be rping a lot with Sinbad ya'know
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Haha yeah, I totally understand! Best of luck finding all the parts you need <3
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December 25th, 2016, 11:28 AM
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Re: River of Sorrow
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Haha yeah, I totally understand! Best of luck finding all the parts you need <3
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Well thanks ^^
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December 27th, 2016, 03:00 AM
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Re: River of Sorrow
this was a bad idea
*gives up and throws plot out the window*
abandon ship?
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January 8th, 2017, 05:12 AM
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Re: River of Sorrow
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Originally Posted by Skybird™
Happiness. Isn't that the goal in life?
Acheron is just a normal stray kitten, living with his siblings and his parents in a back alley way. This tom is a small tom, making him the runt of the litter. So, he's never been noticed much in his family of five. Though, one night, everything suddenly changed for this small kitten. Acheron's father had never wanted kits in the first place, but he stuck with them because he still loved his wonderful mate. Though, after putting up with the kits and a yowling fight with his mate, Acheron's father suddenly up and left. The tom and his siblings are left with just their mother, and everything adjusts after awhile. Though, tragedy decides to strike the kit's family again. Another grown tom falls in love with Acheron's mother and seems to hate her kits, though Acheron's mother is too involved in her new love to realize that this tom threatens her kittens. This goes on for awhile with the new tom, Acheron's mother neglecting her kits for the love of the tom who snaps at Acheron and his siblings. After awhile, this new tom is fed up with Acheron's smart thoughts and blabber mouth. So, what does he do? He claws Acheron across the face, flinging the small kitten into the ground and tearing off his ear and leaving a terrible wound on his face. Meanwhile, Acheron's siblings are terrified and their mother finally realizes this tom isn't a good person. She begins to yell at the tom to leave, leave her and her kits. Though, the tom isn't having this. He engages a fight with Acheron's mother and wins, killing the beautiful she-cat. He then just leaves, leaving the kits without a mother and only with themselves. Acheron and his siblings are horrified as they shockingly stare at the body of their mother, stained in a pool of her own thick blood. These young kittens have no real idea what to do until Acheron decides they should leave, in case the tom comes back for them. So, saying their last goodbyes to their deceased mother, the small kittens trek out into the large world. The 5 moon old kittens find their way through the city, avoiding twolegs, other older cats, dogs, etc. Though, they find their way blocked by a thick black river of speeding monsters. These kittens, around 7 moons now, don't know if they should cross. Acheron says they can do it with just some timing, so he keeps watch for these large and loud monsters. Acheron gets one of his siblings across the road again, but tragedy strikes again. Acheron told his other sibling to cross, not seeing the large monster coming up in the distance. Acheron and his sibling have to watch as their other sibling gets crushed and mangled under the round feet of the monster, his last words a yowl of pain. The remaining two kitten-age cats are frozen at seeing the mangled body of their sibling in the black river that twolegs call a road. Acheron's sibling manages to guide him across the road and they stare out at their fallen and lost sibling. The young tom is now ridden with the guilt of sending his sibling out into the road at the wrong time. Their death is his fault, and it doesn't leave him. His other sibling keeps trying to reassure him that it's alright but it doesn't work. So, they keep on moving. Acheron and his last family member, his only sibling, find their way into a forest. Around this time, they aren't exactly kittens anymore, they're about 9 moons. Though, the two cats run into some rouge's territory and this cat attacks Acheron's sibling. Acheron's sibling tries to fight back but it's no use, as they've never been in a fight before. The sibling's last words before being killed by this cat were; "Run, Acheron! Run!". So, Acheron ran. He ran and ran until he couldn't run anymore and basically collapsed. The young tom is now alone, his family gone and dead. He begins to pretty much weep, right there and then. He's ready, this young tom is already ready for death. Though, a very old male loner finds poor Acheron and approaches him. The old tom begins to talk to Acheron, asking why he's weeping and why he's just lying there. Acheron tells the tom most things and this old tom lets the young cat stay with him. Acheron and the tom develop a father-son bond, the two cats loving each other like family. This tom raises Acheron like his own son, teaching him how to hunt and fight so he can survive. After a few moons, Acheron is now 14 moons. He spent five moons with this tom and has decided to live with him for the rest of his life. Though, misery decides to strike this time. The old tom dies in his sleep, just from old age as he's not really able to live any longer. Acheron weeps and yowls with emotional pain over his body, not knowing what to do. He buries the old and now deceased tom, trudging along his path of sorrow into the forest. He soon hits the territories of the clans and becomes friends with a RiverClan tom. Him and the tom actually begin to fall in love after a few moons. The RiverClan tom then suggests that Acheron should come join RiverClan. So, the tom gets into RiverClan under the reason that he's not terribly evil and he just wants to love his mate. Acheron gets a name change to Sorrowpaw, and eventually Sorrowsmile for the way he's usually seen softly smiling. Though, a little after Sorrowsmile becomes a full warrior, the RiverClan tom that he loved and was his mate dies. He and his mate were out in the territory, patrolling the borders together when a cat attacked them in some kind of horrible border skirmish. The tom fought for Sorrowsmile yelling pretty much the same thing his sibling had yelled to him all those moons ago; "Run, Sorrowsmile! Run! Get help!". So Sorrowsmile did run, he ran faster then he had when his sibling had told him to run. Though, when he came back with two other RiverClanners, it was too late. His mate was dead, killed. Sorrowsmile wouldn't leave his body, having to be taken away by other warriors. He lost his smile, going back into his quiet and depressed mode. Everyone he's ever loved had died, and there was no one else for him. So, Sorrowsmile lives his days out in RiverClan, focusing on becoming the best warrior he can be...
Well, sorrow is all we get...
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Well this is my sad plot involving what's going to be my only RiverClan cat Acheron/Sorrowsmile. I hope people join!
Acheron's Character Page
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Acheron/Sorrowsmile - Taken by @ Skybird™
Mother - Open
Father - Open
Sibling 1 - Open
Sibling 2 - Open
New Tom/Mother's New Mate - Open
Sibling Killer - Open
Old Loner Tom - Open
RiverClan Tom - Open
Mate Killer(Any clan/affiliation) - Open
RiverClanner 1(Preferably also Sorrowsmile's friend) - Beepaw - @ fenic!
RiverClanner 2(Preferably also Sorrowsmile's friend) - Open
-Form With Link-
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-Form Without Link-
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Please keep in mind that Acheron and his siblings will start out at about one and a half moons so some characters won't be played for awhile and ages need to be set for around how Acheron's age is at the time they come in
Also keep in mind that this is my baby and I will probably be picky
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Character Name: Spottedsong
Character Link: http://maplefall.weebly.com/ (Thunderclan.)
Role: Mate killer.
Roleplay Example: See Windclan nursery, page 22, 23, 24.
Activeness Level: 8.74 ppd
Other: Nope
Questions: Nope.
Last edited by Momotaro; January 8th, 2017 at 05:14 AM.
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January 8th, 2017, 09:25 AM
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Re: River of Sorrow
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Originally Posted by Maplefall
Character Name: Spottedsong
Character Link: http://maplefall.weebly.com/ (Thunderclan.)
Role: Mate killer.
Roleplay Example: See Windclan nursery, page 22, 23, 24.
Activeness Level: 8.74 ppd
Other: Nope
Questions: Nope.
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Sounds good enough
Accepted ^^
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January 8th, 2017, 12:14 PM
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Re: River of Sorrow
Tis not a bad idea! There are no bad ideas!
Name:Will
Age:1 1/2 Moons
Gender: Male
Role: Sibling 1
Clan/Affiliation: Loner
Appearance: Here
Personality: Will always looks on the bright side of things. The young cat tries to cheer anyone up who's really sad and is rarely sad himself. Despite the bad things in life he tries to keep on a smile and be strong. When his father died he pushed the anger deep down and laughed, when his mother died he pushed the sadness deep down and didn't cry. Instead he copes with pain by pretending it was never there. Which is both unhealthy and helpful.
Roleplay Example: Quakepaw jumped herself, not realizing she had been approaching the camp already. After her training session with Leafstorm the apprentices mind had been swirling with thoughts that had made her feel both broken and angry. She had only been staring at her paws when a cat, looking around her age, had called out "Who's there?" Quakepaw jolted back to the presence pushing her session aside. "Me." She grunted. The she-cat wasn't necessarily shy, but at times closed minded and not open to the idea of new friends. Except this cat did not seem friendly. Quakepaw had just barely seen his claws sheath. Her emerald eyes widened, "Excuse me?" She stared at the cat angrily, "were you planning on hurting me?"
Activeness Level: 8/10
Other: He has a severe fear of cars and freezes up on the road because of that.
Questions: Nada
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January 9th, 2017, 01:41 AM
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Re: River of Sorrow
{The story made me tear up a bit}
Name:Hermes
{It's the name of the Greek God of boundaries, travel, communication, language and writing. I kinda thought that it fit the story a tad}
Age: 2 Moons
Gender: Male
Role: sibling 2
Clan/Affiliation: Loner
Apperance: He looks a lot like sorrowsmile, just slightly pudgier and bigger, more muscular. Here
Personality: He's a very curious and adventurous tom, always trying to go out and explore whenever he has the chance, he wants to know anything about everything, wanting the answers to the world. He loves his family and is always supporting them, he will do anything to make sure they reach their goals, even if it means getting rid of his own. He's never seen frowning, always has a smile plastered on his face, trying to keep those around him happy and positive. He hates to be told what to do but will end up doing it anyways, possibly asking for others to help him out with his order, all in all he's a very curious, adventurous, and loving tom.
Role Play Example:{In Dark Forest Territory with Stormiiix}
Grasspaw let out a chuckle and jumped down from a large oak,landing elegantly right in front of the little kit, his muscles rippling as he landed. The tabby brushed himself off and looked down at the little kit, a soft smile on his face "Hello Leafkit, you may not know me, but I'm your older brother, Grasspaw." he said kindly, making sure not to scare the little kit. He knew his brother isn't a true Dark Forest follower, but honestly he just wanted to see his younger brother, he may be an evil cat but he still cared for his family. The brown tabby sat himself down and neatly wrapped his tail around his paws, his emerald eyes shone with longing as he looked at his brother, envying the living as he remembered the brutal way he was murdered. With a sigh he flicked his ear and looked in another's direction, "Sit yourself down make yourself comfortable, I promise no cats going to harm you here." he said, turning his gaze back upon the little kit, his face shown no emotion as he scooted closer the kit "Now, you may be wondering why I've summoned you here, well it's to train you! So you could be the greatest apprentice, the greatest warrior of your clan!" he said, grinning widely as he remembered his apprentice days when he was alive, grudge then flowing into his heart as he remembered how Burntwiser slashed his throat, killing him, he hated it, he hated him, he hated those weak Starclan believers, and he refused to let his younger sibling become one, he wouldn't help Leafkit get stronger, even if it meant sacrificing a few lives, this brotherly bonding quickly began to turn into an evil plot idea.
Activness level:8/10
Other: nope don't think so
Questions: hm nope
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January 9th, 2017, 10:41 AM
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Re: River of Sorrow
Name:ripplepaw
Age:9 moons
Gender:she-cat
Role:friend
Clan/Affiliation:riverclan
Appearance: https://goo.gl/images/o7pfAw
Personality:sassy, loving,playful, likes to train, loving, caring,she gets bored easily, she likes to hag out with friends, rude, smart, smart mouth
Roleplay Example:Riplepaw padded out of the apperrentice den and went into the clearing she stopped to stretch her legs.once she was done streaching her legs one at a time she look around camp.huffing she headed her way to camp entrance.she sniffed the ground for prey,nothing where have all the birds gone she glanced up at the sky preying to Starclan that she could find something she pricked her ears and sniffed harder. She sniffed the ground until she heard the song is a bird.there! There was the bird sitting on a willow tree.she stalked forward to get into leaping postin.she wiggled her haunches and jumped she opened her jaws to catch the bird. But instead of catching the bird with her jaws he paw smaked the bird to the ground.befor the bird could get to its senses she leaped over to the bird and killed it with a swift bite.
Activeness Level:8/10
Other:none
Questions:nope
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January 9th, 2017, 01:44 PM
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Re: River of Sorrow
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Originally Posted by starfall
{The story made me tear up a bit}
Name:Hermes
{It's the name of the Greek God of boundaries, travel, communication, language and writing. I kinda thought that it fit the story a tad}
Age: 2 Moons
Gender: Male
Role: sibling 2
Clan/Affiliation: Loner
Apperance: He looks a lot like sorrowsmile, just slightly pudgier and bigger, more muscular. Here
Personality: He's a very curious and adventurous tom, always trying to go out and explore whenever he has the chance, he wants to know anything about everything, wanting the answers to the world. He loves his family and is always supporting them, he will do anything to make sure they reach their goals, even if it means getting rid of his own. He's never seen frowning, always has a smile plastered on his face, trying to keep those around him happy and positive. He hates to be told what to do but will end up doing it anyways, possibly asking for others to help him out with his order, all in all he's a very curious, adventurous, and loving tom.
Role Play Example:{In Dark Forest Territory with Stormiiix}
Grasspaw let out a chuckle and jumped down from a large oak,landing elegantly right in front of the little kit, his muscles rippling as he landed. The tabby brushed himself off and looked down at the little kit, a soft smile on his face "Hello Leafkit, you may not know me, but I'm your older brother, Grasspaw." he said kindly, making sure not to scare the little kit. He knew his brother isn't a true Dark Forest follower, but honestly he just wanted to see his younger brother, he may be an evil cat but he still cared for his family. The brown tabby sat himself down and neatly wrapped his tail around his paws, his emerald eyes shone with longing as he looked at his brother, envying the living as he remembered the brutal way he was murdered. With a sigh he flicked his ear and looked in another's direction, "Sit yourself down make yourself comfortable, I promise no cats going to harm you here." he said, turning his gaze back upon the little kit, his face shown no emotion as he scooted closer the kit "Now, you may be wondering why I've summoned you here, well it's to train you! So you could be the greatest apprentice, the greatest warrior of your clan!" he said, grinning widely as he remembered his apprentice days when he was alive, grudge then flowing into his heart as he remembered how Burntwiser slashed his throat, killing him, he hated it, he hated him, he hated those weak Starclan believers, and he refused to let his younger sibling become one, he wouldn't help Leafkit get stronger, even if it meant sacrificing a few lives, this brotherly bonding quickly began to turn into an evil plot idea.
Activness level:8/10
Other: nope don't think so
Questions: hm nope
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(lol that's what I was going for)
I like him! Accepted!
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January 9th, 2017, 01:47 PM
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Re: River of Sorrow
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Originally Posted by Queenie
Tis not a bad idea! There are no bad ideas!
Name:Will
Age:1 1/2 Moons
Gender: Male
Role: Sibling 1
Clan/Affiliation: Loner
Appearance: Here
Personality: Will always looks on the bright side of things. The young cat tries to cheer anyone up who's really sad and is rarely sad himself. Despite the bad things in life he tries to keep on a smile and be strong. When his father died he pushed the anger deep down and laughed, when his mother died he pushed the sadness deep down and didn't cry. Instead he copes with pain by pretending it was never there. Which is both unhealthy and helpful.
Roleplay Example: Quakepaw jumped herself, not realizing she had been approaching the camp already. After her training session with Leafstorm the apprentices mind had been swirling with thoughts that had made her feel both broken and angry. She had only been staring at her paws when a cat, looking around her age, had called out "Who's there?" Quakepaw jolted back to the presence pushing her session aside. "Me." She grunted. The she-cat wasn't necessarily shy, but at times closed minded and not open to the idea of new friends. Except this cat did not seem friendly. Quakepaw had just barely seen his claws sheath. Her emerald eyes widened, "Excuse me?" She stared at the cat angrily, "were you planning on hurting me?"
Activeness Level: 8/10
Other: He has a severe fear of cars and freezes up on the road because of that.
Questions: Nada
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I like him but I wanna keep one sibling form open for a bit haha
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