Yolando, Giglia, and Porky's tale (EPIC STORY!!)

[Mango]

A Young kit named Yolando was born in the forest during a forest fire, she was trespassing while pregnant through Shadowclan territory, and gave birth and held in her jaw and back. Three little kits, Yolando an all black tom, Giglia a scrawny black tortoiseshell she-kit, and Porky a beefy looking all brown tom. The mother was struggling to get all three to shelter and by mistake dropped Porky. A Shadowclan warrior, Pineshadow picked up Porky and ran, since he thought they were part of Shadowclan and couldn't scent anything besides smoke. The mother shouted to Pineshadow," Thanks!" she coughed," He's named Porky!"
Pineshadow paused," Porky...he must be a rouge, hmm..it's a kit and needs saving."
Yolando and Giglia finally made it to shelter. Shadowclan helped her out. And she was reunited with Porky.
One moon later...
Yolando woke up and prodded his mother," Ma!"
She grunted and rolled over," What Yolando?"
Yolando asked," Why do we have different names not clan names like everyone else?"
She sighed," Your a rouge recovering in Shadowclan, when my lungs have healed from smoke inhalation and Giglia is stronger then we will leave."
Yolando asked," Why must we leave?"
She sighed," Rouges don't have a feeble lifestyle like this."
Yolando gave up and wandered over to Porky," Porky!"
Porky turned his head," Yes?"
Yolando smirked," Wanna request clan names?"
Porky grunted," Nuh. I fat and me body is stuck to ground, all I do is eat, sleep and grunt." (purposefully improper grammar)
Yolando shrugged," Aight Porky, welp! Mama named you well!"
Yolando came over to his sister," Giglia, Ya wanna ask Radishstar for clan names?"
Giglia nodded," YEAH!"
They ran to Radishstar," Radishstar!!"
Radishstar blinked and sighed," What is it Giglia and Yolando?"
Yolando squeaked," We want clan names!!!"
Radishstar blinked," Okay... What about Porky?"
Giglia shrugged," I don't know."
Yolando replied," He's fat and lazy, he doesn't care!"
Radishstar nodded," Do you have any preferences on names?"
Giglia paused," I'd love to be called Vinekit, Grapekit, or actually anything she-catish
Radishstar paused," Would you like Hollykit?"
Giglia squealed," YES!!"
Radishstar stepped on the rock," Let all cats gather!"
A few cats arrived, seeing it involved one moon old kits.
Radishstar smiled," Starclan, remove the name that stands before her, you will be known as Hollykit!"
Hollykit squealed," I'm a clanner now!!"
Radishstar shrugged," I guess?"
Hollykit was proud of the name," I'm a clan cat you aren't!!"
Radishstar smiled," Yolando, you will be known as Missingkit!"
Missingkit yowled proudly," PORKY! GET A CLAN NAME!"
Porky grunted with half a vole in his jaw," ugh?"
Missingkit blinked," COME ON PORKY!!"
Radishstar smirked," Porky- you'll be known as Fatkit."
They became clanners from that day forward.