my characters die using the same format as my first one
Otterkit was cold. He didn't know how to treat his fever, because it didn't come from infection or anything. So he huddled, burning and freezing at the same time. He blinked, delirious, and whimpered, "Lostspark? Mossfreckle? Can you help me...?". But he wasn't in ShadowClan anymore. He was hallucinating for sure now. He drew in a final shuddering breath, before closing his hazy eyes and letting go of the world forever.
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Silverpaw was cold. He didn't know how to treat his fever, because it didn't come from infection or anything. So he huddled, burning and freezing at the same time. He blinked, delirious, and whimpered, "Lostspark? Mossfreckle? Can you help me...?". But he wasn't in ShadowClan anymore. He was hallucinating for sure now. He drew in a final shuddering breath, before closing his hazy eyes and letting go of the world forever.
(not me copy and pasting)
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