Danger In Fiction

[Rivergold]

"I'm sleepy," she shifted in the chair to get more comfortable, and leaned her head back. (hey, he wanted her to sleep.)

[appariitiion]

Originally Posted by Rivergold

"I'm sleepy," she shifted in the chair to get more comfortable, and leaned her head back. (hey, he wanted her to sleep.)

He grumbled, and smacked her across the face. "Don't go to sleep," he told her. "We need to have a little chit-chat, brat." He wanted to murder this girl right then and there, and he could, but something told him not to. Maybe it was the fact that he's have to rewrite the whole story by getting a new character. That would be frustrating. The story could use a few.. many changes though, but usually that would happen after he'd finished it.

[Rivergold]

She heaved a huge sigh. "Well you could have just said that instead of monologing, but fine." She took a breath, and in a tone that was far too chipper, asked. "'where am I,' 'why am I tied to a chair,' who are you,'?"
(yes I copy and pasted.)

[appariitiion]

Originally Posted by Rivergold

She heaved a huge sigh. "Well you could have just said that instead of monologing, but fine." She took a breath, and in a tone that was far too chipper, asked. "'where am I,' 'why am I tied to a chair,' who are you,'?"
(yes I copy and pasted.)

He glared at Ana, hating her sarcasm. "Ehem," he coughed. He leaned against his baseball bat and spoke. "You don't know me, but you probably know my books. I've written many bestsellers over the years, but lately, people- characters- like you haven't been cooperating too well. You see, I need you to work with me, or I'll have to make you. I was born with a power, a gift. What I write actually happens! But there's a downside to that. You pawns have a bit of free will in the worlds I create. I need you all to just simply work with me for one book. Unless there's a sequel.." He walked over to a table with a cloth over if. He glanced at Ana, and then pulled off the cloth to reveal many sharp objects and tools on the table, including a needle, a knife, and even a pair scissors. "So," he asked with an unreadable tone. "Are we gonna do this the easy way or the hard way?"

[Rivergold]

Originally Posted by ItsATryp

He glared at Ana, hating her sarcasm. "Ehem," he coughed. He leaned against his baseball bat and spoke. "You don't know me, but you probably know my books. I've written many bestsellers over the years, but lately, people- characters- like you haven't been cooperating too well. You see, I need you to work with me, or I'll have to make you. I was born with a power, a gift. What I write actually happens! But there's a downside to that. You pawns have a bit of free will in the worlds I create. I need you all to just simply work with me for one book. Unless there's a sequel.." He walked over to a table with a cloth over if. He glanced at Ana, and then pulled off the cloth to reveal many sharp objects and tools on the table, including a needle, a knife, and even a pair scissors. "So," he asked with an unreadable tone. "Are we gonna do this the easy way or the hard way?"

Her eyes lit up at the shiny objects and she gasped with delight. "Are we going to play?"

[appariitiion]

Originally Posted by Rivergold

Her eyes lit up at the shiny objects and she gasped with delight. "Are we going to play?"

He slowly picked up the knife, but dropped it when she spoke with happiness. He turned to her, pure confusion and disgust lighting his face. This whole time he'd been confused, but not this much. "You seem happy about this," he mumbled, glancing to make sure the ropes weren't loose just in case."What, are you a freakin masochist too?"

[Rivergold]

Originally Posted by ItsATryp

He slowly picked up the knife, but dropped it when she spoke with happiness. He turned to her, pure confusion and disgust lighting his face. This whole time he'd been confused, but not this much. "You seem happy about this," he mumbled, glancing to make sure the ropes weren't loose just in case."What, are you a freakin masochist too?"

She tilted her head with a smile. "No, I just wanted to see your reaction."

[appariitiion]

Originally Posted by Rivergold

She tilted her head with a smile. "No, I just wanted to see your reaction."

"Great, great," he rolled his eyes angrily. The man picked up the knife once more and locked eyes with Ana. "I have a question for you." He glanced at the sharp object in his hand, then back to the girl. "Are we gonna do this the easy way or the hard way?"

[Rivergold]

Originally Posted by ItsATryp

"Great, great," he rolled his eyes angrily. The man picked up the knife once more and locked eyes with Ana. "I have a question for you." He glanced at the sharp object in his hand, then back to the girl. "Are we gonna do this the easy way or the hard way?"

"Well, what do you wanna do?"

[appariitiion]

Originally Posted by Rivergold

"Well, what do you wanna do?"

"I want to get my story finished, that's what I want to do," he said.