Snowpaw's Dark Forest Mentor

[dino.]

Originally Posted by Snow Blade

@Coriander
I love Scottish folds, although they always look so grumpy xD

#Accepted

Honestly my favorite breed UwU
Thanks, man! This is gonna be fun!

[Madelaine]

Smallkit could be a future mate. She'll be an apprentice in Altoona nd will be training in the dark forest as well.

[dino.]

When do you want to start? @Snow Blade

[Freesia]

hm, if you need another mentor or an irl bad influence, i have wolfeyes, who is for some reason not involved with the dark forest

[Cosmo]

Doekit could be that one good influence friend/enemy. He would probably try to comfort him about his eye, and then get scarred away by Snow. Idk, but he's my only SkyClan kitty that would fit anything.

[Frostbitten]

Hmm... I could actually be using a good dark forest cat around here. I'll sign up!

Name: Thornheart

Gender: Fem

Clan: Skyclan

Orientation: Pans

Wanted role: Close friend OR mentor

Personality: Insane, confused about her past, depressed, but somehow very apologetic

Appearance: Russet cat with green eyes. (Idk why I use green eyes so much...) Black stripes slide across her back. She has a horrible scar on her chest. here's the URL..
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http://warriorcatsonline.com/forums/...pictureid=7621
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Backstory: Thornkit was a good kit to start with. She was kind and generous. Her father, mother, and sister being a happy family. But of course, like almost every kit, she was curious.
One day, Thornkit just couldn't wait anymore. There was so much opportunities for her outside the clan. And that 5 moon-old kit followed her dreams. But this was the wrong decision.
As Thornkit was travelling through the hunting grounds, two other cats appeared in her path, but they had.. A very strange scent. It smelled as if it was fresh prey, and a loner... Together...
No, was it true? The old fables that the elders used to tell. Any young kit or apprentice that travelled into the woods unattended would one day see these two cats. Their names are unknown. But they have a ghostly figure to them, and something else from them didn't look right.
Thornkit had to run, no, this was definitely a bad decision, she could hear padding footsteps behind her, and she fell onto a twig, tripping herself and slowing her down. The two cats pouncing onto her. Scratching her chest where her heart would be. It felt as if one hundred needles stabbed her heart.
Thornkit finally ran away from the forest and ran back into the nursery, crying and jumping into her mother's lap. Her mother looked scared and shocked, but aswell as disappointed for disobeying her. Later on, things began to change. Her mother started paying more attention to her sister, and her sis started acting better than usual. Hoping not to meet the same fate as Thornkit.
As Thornkit became an apprentice, she started getting more insane, aswell as paranoid. She started studying the forest and watching out for the two cats that she saw as a kit. But they never came back. Making her have so much more questions and theories. But all of this was messing with her head.
Thornpaw begged and yelled at the elders to tell her everything they know. But they told her everything, and there was nothing else they knew. But Thornpaw knew that the elders would have to spill it.
"TALK TO ME! YOU OLD TATTERED FURS! (XD)" Thornpaw yelled, showing her vicious claws to the elders. " OR ELSE... "
"Listen, young one, I have told you everything I know!" One of the elders begged, falling to the ground and yowling.
"SPILL IT, SPILL IT, SPILL IT!" She yelled, clawing the elders until they collapsed.
Leafstar walked into the elders den, so shocked that her fur stood on end. Thornpaw heavily breathing as she ran past Leafstar, into the forest. Running deep, deep into the woods as a loner. She eventually died one day of her own survival. Known as Thornheart in the dark forest.

(Too harsh? Too powerful? Needs some editing? Just reply to me! I know this may be a long backstory, but I'd really like an evil character for once. Thx! :3)

[Blazepaw]

Originally Posted by Adderstream

Hmm... I could actually be using a good dark forest cat around here. I'll sign up!

Name: Thornheart

Gender: Fem

Clan: Skyclan

Orientation: Pans

Wanted role: Close friend OR mentor

Personality: Insane, confused about her past, depressed, but somehow very apologetic

Appearance: Russet cat with green eyes. (Idk why I use green eyes so much...) Black stripes slide across her back. She has a horrible scar on her chest. here's the URL..
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http://warriorcatsonline.com/forums/...pictureid=7621
---------------
Backstory: Thornkit was a good kit to start with. She was kind and generous. Her father, mother, and sister being a happy family. But of course, like almost every kit, she was curious.
One day, Thornkit just couldn't wait anymore. There was so much opportunities for her outside the clan. And that 5 moon-old kit followed her dreams. But this was the wrong decision.
As Thornkit was travelling through the hunting grounds, two other cats appeared in her path, but they had.. A very strange scent. It smelled as if it was fresh prey, and a loner... Together...
No, was it true? The old fables that the elders used to tell. Any young kit or apprentice that travelled into the woods unattended would one day see these two cats. Their names are unknown. But they have a ghostly figure to them, and something else from them didn't look right.
Thornkit had to run, no, this was definitely a bad decision, she could hear padding footsteps behind her, and she fell onto a twig, tripping herself and slowing her down. The two cats pouncing onto her. Scratching her chest where her heart would be. It felt as if one hundred needles stabbed her heart.
Thornkit finally ran away from the forest and ran back into the nursery, crying and jumping into her mother's lap. Her mother looked scared and shocked, but aswell as disappointed for disobeying her. Later on, things began to change. Her mother started paying more attention to her sister, and her sis started acting better than usual. Hoping not to meet the same fate as Thornkit.
As Thornkit became an apprentice, she started getting more insane, aswell as paranoid. She started studying the forest and watching out for the two cats that she saw as a kit. But they never came back. Making her have so much more questions and theories. But all of this was messing with her head.
Thornpaw begged and yelled at the elders to tell her everything they know. But they told her everything, and there was nothing else they knew. But Thornpaw knew that the elders would have to spill it.
"TALK TO ME! YOU OLD TATTERED FURS! (XD)" Thornpaw yelled, showing her vicious claws to the elders. " OR ELSE... "
"Listen, young one, I have told you everything I know!" One of the elders begged, falling to the ground and yowling.
"SPILL IT, SPILL IT, SPILL IT!" She yelled, clawing the elders until they collapsed.
Leafstar walked into the elders den, so shocked that her fur stood on end. Thornpaw heavily breathing as she ran past Leafstar, into the forest. Running deep, deep into the woods as a loner. She eventually died one day of her own survival. Known as Thornheart in the dark forest.

(Too harsh? Too powerful? Needs some editing? Just reply to me! I know this may be a long backstory, but I'd really like an evil character for once. Thx! :3)

I’ll put her down as mentor ^^

[TawnyNeedsACoffee]

#TheSadClub
xD
@Snow Blade