Broken

[Doodle]

I need some action for my Skyclan gal, Marblestrike.

Marblestrike is never one to allow herself to get close to anyone, not even her clanmates. But one day while out alone near the border, she comes across [Tom 1]. [Tom 1] looks so similar to her dead brother, Slip, that Marblestrike is thrown off guard for a moment, stopping her from chasing the stranger off right away. By the time she comes to her senses and tries to pull her walls back up, [Tom 1] has already figured out that she's really not the cold cat that she's made herself seem to her clan. During their conversation, he intrigues Marble enough to agree to meeting him again at the border. And again after that. With each meeting, she finds that it's easy for her to let her guard down around the tom, and for some reason- maybe because he's not in her clan so she doesn't have to worry about any gossip being spread by him- she stops trying to close herself off around him. Marblestrike ends up falling for [Tom 1], quick and hard. The two continue meeting up regularly.

Before long, Marble realizes that she's expecting [Tom 1]'s kits. She plans to tell him the next time she meets him, in hopes of the tom joining Skyclan to be with her. But when she goes to their meeting spot, she realizes that [Tom 1] is not alone. [Steel], one of [Tom 1]'s friends, is standing with them, and Marblestrike overhears them talking. It quickly becomes apparent that the two rogues plan on attacking the expecting molly. Heartbroken and confused, Marble tries to leave- but not before being noticed. The two rogues chase her through the territory, eventually catching up and attacking. Marble fights back desperately, wanting to save her life and the kits in her belly. The molly is able to send them both off, but not without receiving plenty of wounds herself. Critically wounded, she falls to the ground. With the amount of pain she's in, Marblestrike knows her kits are gone. Without her kits, and now knowing the tom she loved was just a cruel, evil backstabber, she finds no reason to try to live herself, and plans on just giving up- leaving herself there to bleed to death.

Thankfully, that isn't the case, as a nearby patrol heard the commotion from the end of the fight and soon enough reach the injured molly. [Crowfoot], [Rabbitskip], and [Turtlesplash] together carry/drag Marblestrike back to camp and to the medicine den, where Shinefang is able to save her life. It is confirmed, however, that her kits have been lost. Now Marblestrike is left even more depressed than she had been before meeting [Tom 1]. She takes some time staying within camp recovering, and the clanmates who had rescued her had found out enough about the situation to know that Marble was hurting- and not just from her visible wounds. [Crowfoot], [Rabbitskip], and [Turtlesplash] all start putting in a visible effort to grow close to the molly in hopes of helping out a fellow clanmate. Marblestrike at this point has put her guard back up and is more convinced than ever that she cannot let anyone past her walls or she'll be hurt again. Her cold and harsh attitude manages to scare off [Crowfoot], but she finds herself unable to shake off [Rabbitskip] and [Turtlesplash]. Slowly, the two build a friendship with Marblestrike, whose walls are gradually broken down. She lost a love and her kits, but in the end gains two best friends.

Roles:

[Rogue]
*Must be a tom
*Must look similar to Slip, Marble's brother (crucial for making her let her guard down when meeting him.)
*Must be able to hide his dark intentions

[Rogue 2] Taken by @Blazepaw's Steel
*any gender
*friends with Rogue
*Must be willing to kill Marble for whichever reason

[Clanmate 1] Taken by @Spikes's Crowfoot
*any gender
*must be in Skyclan
*will give up on getting close to Marble after being victim to her cold ways of distancing herself

[Clanmate 2] Taken by @Suspiciousmindz's Rabbitskip
*any gender
*must be in Skyclan
*won't give up on getting close to Marble, even when she says rude things in an effort to make them stay away
--(optional- only required if you want your cat to be a love interest in the future) Needs to be a tom, and around Marble's age
--If you want this role and want to be a love interest, let me know in the 'other' section of the form!

[Clanmate 3] taken by @Cosmo's Turtlesplash
*any gender
*must be in Skyclan
*won't give up on getting close to Marble, even when she says rude things in an effort to make them stay away
--(optional- only required if you want your cat to be a love interest in the future) Needs to be a tom, and around Marble's age
--If you want this role and want to be a love interest, let me know in the 'other' section of the form!

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[Stareyes]

Name: Donna
Name Meaning: Taken from 'Belladonna', the scientific name for Deadly Nightshade.
Age: 22 Moons
Appearance: A handsome tom with olive green eyes, a grey coat with patches of white, and a closet full of skeletons.
Personality: A devilish grin is a window is what is underneath this terrorizing cat's soul is like. A terrible cat who went mad with loneliness, he has developed a new alter ego and a small league of cats follow him, out of fear.
Residence: A cave near Riverclan Territory.
Role Wanted: Rouge
Roleplay Example: A large, grey-and-white patched tom drinks from a gurgling creek, undisturbed by a single living thing. It was a beautiful day in the forest, light filtering through the trees, birds singing their song, the rustle of the leaves when an animal climbed its branches.

Donna stretched, then found a tall patch of grasses. Crouching low, his olive eyes (blending into the grass perfectly) spied a young, plump squirrel. Leaping, claws outstretched, the cat didn't miss his target. The pitiful screech of the squirrel was muffled by the creek and the birds. "What a shame. Life isn't fair now, is it? I won't be a Clan cat.. and you, hm? What about you, now?" He asked to the freshly killed squirrel, " You will never see a day's light again!"

After the cold-blooded cat was finished with his lunch, he looked over to the outskirts of Skyclan, seeing how there was but one Warrior, a small plump she-cat. He laughed maliciously, and he could simply kill her, and get into its borders.

"But what about a plan? Why would I be coming to a Clan?" He mewed softly to himself.
"Oh, I've got it. I could be lost! I can't find my family, I've been searching for many a moon."

So, with a terrified expression on his face, the manipulative cat approached Marblestrike. "E-excuse me, miss, I'm lost, and I've been searching, and--"
The she-cat gasped. "Br-brother?"
Other: In a toxic relationship with Wing, a fellow Rouge.
@Doodle

[Doodle]

Originally Posted by Stareyes

Name: Donna
Name Meaning: Taken from 'Belladonna', the scientific name for Deadly Nightshade.
Age: 22 Moons
Appearance: A handsome tom with olive green eyes, a grey coat with patches of white, and a closet full of skeletons.
Personality: A devilish grin is a window is what is underneath this terrorizing cat's soul is like. A terrible cat who went mad with loneliness, he has developed a new alter ego and a small league of cats follow him, out of fear.
Residence: A cave near Riverclan Territory.
Role Wanted: Rouge
Roleplay Example: A large, grey-and-white patched tom drinks from a gurgling creek, undisturbed by a single living thing. It was a beautiful day in the forest, light filtering through the trees, birds singing their song, the rustle of the leaves when an animal climbed its branches.

Donna stretched, then found a tall patch of grasses. Crouching low, his olive eyes (blending into the grass perfectly) spied a young, plump squirrel. Leaping, claws outstretched, the cat didn't miss his target. The pitiful screech of the squirrel was muffled by the creek and the birds. "What a shame. Life isn't fair now, is it? I won't be a Clan cat.. and you, hm? What about you, now?" He asked to the freshly killed squirrel, " You will never see a day's light again!"

After the cold-blooded cat was finished with his lunch, he looked over to the outskirts of Skyclan, seeing how there was but one Warrior, a small plump she-cat. He laughed maliciously, and he could simply kill her, and get into its borders.

"But what about a plan? Why would I be coming to a Clan?" He mewed softly to himself.
"Oh, I've got it. I could be lost! I can't find my family, I've been searching for many a moon."

So, with a terrified expression on his face, the manipulative cat approached Marblestrike. "E-excuse me, miss, I'm lost, and I've been searching, and--"
The she-cat gasped. "Br-brother?"
Other: In a toxic relationship with Wing, a fellow Rouge.
@Doodle

He's absolutely perfect for the role! Definitely accepted!

Also, the rp example really reminded me of the lion king with Scar xD

[Stareyes]

Wait now I have to watch that scene I'm searching it up on YT

[Doodle]

Originally Posted by Stareyes

Wait now I have to watch that scene I'm searching it up on YT

In the scene scar catches a mouse and talks about how life isn’t fair. In it, he says “I’ll never be king, and you? You’ll never live to see another day.” Just thought it was hilarious how similar the two sound up being xD

[Stareyes]

OMG UR RIGHT




/scar is that you??\

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