The Nightmare Continues (Plot)

[King of the Untamed]

@Silver Fishie
@Ombre Party
Hey! So... I have an idea that involves Tigerkit, Nightmare, Maplepaw, and Wispbreeze. Heres my idea;

Nightmare decides to lay low for a while, and Tigerkit grows up, listening to any and all of Wispbreeze's advice she may give as a mother. Maplepaw and Tigerkit eventually fall in love (after, of course, Maplepaw and Tigerkit become warriors -- after growing up together). Maplepaw, now being a warrior, heads out on a hunt, and is killed or badly injured by Nightmare, and Tigerkit (now Tigerscar, as that is the warrior name I've decided for him) vows to get revenge. Several days later, he sneaks out, and fights and kills Nightmare, while also being pretty badly injured himself.

So what do you guys think? Good or naw?

[k!ngk3s]

Originally Posted by Tigerkit of ShadowClan

@Silver Fishie
@Ombre Party
Hey! So... I have an idea that involves Tigerkit, Nightmare, Maplepaw, and Wispbreeze. Heres my idea;

Nightmare decides to lay low for a while, and Tigerkit grows up, listening to any and all of Wispbreeze's advice she may give as a mother. Maplepaw and Tigerkit eventually fall in love (after, of course, Maplepaw and Tigerkit become warriors -- after growing up together). Maplepaw, now being a warrior, heads out on a hunt, and is killed or badly injured by Nightmare, and Tigerkit (now Tigerscar, as that is the warrior name I've decided for him) vows to get revenge. Several days later, he sneaks out, and fights and kills Nightmare, while also being pretty badly injured himself.

So what do you guys think? Good or naw?

Not bad but my advice is to make it a bit bigger I mean you dont have to do it but just saying

[pomegranate]

Originally Posted by Tigerkit of ShadowClan

@Silver Fishie
@Ombre Party
Hey! So... I have an idea that involves Tigerkit, Nightmare, Maplepaw, and Wispbreeze. Heres my idea;

Nightmare decides to lay low for a while, and Tigerkit grows up, listening to any and all of Wispbreeze's advice she may give as a mother. Maplepaw and Tigerkit eventually fall in love (after, of course, Maplepaw and Tigerkit become warriors -- after growing up together). Maplepaw, now being a warrior, heads out on a hunt, and is killed or badly injured by Nightmare, and Tigerkit (now Tigerscar, as that is the warrior name I've decided for him) vows to get revenge. Several days later, he sneaks out, and fights and kills Nightmare, while also being pretty badly injured himself.

So what do you guys think? Good or naw?

Perhaps when he and Maple fall in love, she is expecting his kits?
Of course, Maple is a very restless and ambitious warrior, so instead of staying put in the nursery, she goes out for a hunt. When she goes out of camp, she is attacked by Nightmare and horribly wounded where she is then found by some other cat or Tiger to be healed.
She may or may not die, but her kits will. Then maybe that’s why Tiger gets really angry and everything at Nightmare?

(Just a thought, to throw in more drama.)

[King of the Untamed]

Originally Posted by Silver Fishie

Perhaps when he and Maple fall in love, she is expecting his kits?
Of course, Maple is a very restless and ambitious warrior, so instead of staying put in the nursery, she goes out for a hunt. When she goes out of camp, she is attacked by Nightmare and horribly wounded where she is then found by some other cat or Tiger to be healed.
She may or may not die, but her kits will. Then maybe that’s why Tiger gets really angry and everything at Nightmare?

(Just a thought, to throw in more drama.)

Oh heck... that is a great idea! Maple expecting Tigers kits would just cause utter gore in the fight between Tiger and Nightmare! I can't believe I didn't think about that

[King of the Untamed]

Originally Posted by Silver Fishie

Perhaps when he and Maple fall in love, she is expecting his kits?
Of course, Maple is a very restless and ambitious warrior, so instead of staying put in the nursery, she goes out for a hunt. When she goes out of camp, she is attacked by Nightmare and horribly wounded where she is then found by some other cat or Tiger to be healed.
She may or may not die, but her kits will. Then maybe that’s why Tiger gets really angry and everything at Nightmare?

(Just a thought, to throw in more drama.)

I just thought of something; since Tiger lost his birth parents and his kits to Nightmare, having him lose Maple as well would be the worst thing for him... even after killing Nightmare, Tiger would be just a shell of his former self. I think its a great idea for Maple to be badly injured and lose her kits, but her dying would break Tiger. So let's make it that if Maple is expecting his kits, she doesn't die. However, if Maple isn't expecting kits, then it wouldn't completely break Tiger.

[King of the Untamed]

Essentially, if Maple is expecting kits, she shouldn't die, but if she isn't expecting kits, she could die. But really, its up to you, it is your character after all.

[pomegranate]

Originally Posted by Tigerkit of ShadowClan

I just thought of something; since Tiger lost his birth parents and his kits to Nightmare, having him lose Maple as well would be the worst thing for him... even after killing Nightmare, Tiger would be just a shell of his former self. I think its a great idea for Maple to be badly injured and lose her kits, but her dying would break Tiger. So let's make it that if Maple is expecting his kits, she doesn't die. However, if Maple isn't expecting kits, then it wouldn't completely break Tiger.

Definitely.
Even then he could still be a shell of himself after losing his kits, and Maple would be able to help him through it, then perhaps fail badly?
Then after awhile of trying to comfort him, they split up, and then become mates once more?
I’m just going to keep on throwing more drama in there, so just tell me when to stop. :3

[pomegranate]

Originally Posted by Tigerkit of ShadowClan

Essentially, if Maple is expecting kits, she shouldn't die, but if she isn't expecting kits, she could die. But really, its up to you, it is your character after all.

It depends on how I feel about her character at the time the plot happens.
She may die, although at this time I’m not keen on that idea just yet, but if it helps further plot development that might be good.
Tiger could be devastated and alone, and then maybe Maple could come to him through Starclan?

[King of the Untamed]

Originally Posted by Silver Fishie

It depends on how I feel about her character at the time the plot happens.
She may die, although at this time I’m not keen on that idea just yet, but if it helps further plot development that might be good.
Tiger could be devastated and alone, and then maybe Maple could come to him through Starclan?

I'm thinking the idea where they split up and then get back together later would work better, although Maple periodically visiting Tiger from StarClan would work if you choose to kill her off. After growing up together, and surviving so much together, Tiger would at least want to see Maple. He would have some comfort knowing she was in StarClan, safe and sound. That is, if you decide to kill her off. If not, they could split up for a few days, weeks, or maybe a month (two months at tops), then get back together and make another litter.

[Pluto]

Originally Posted by Tigerkit of ShadowClan

@Silver Fishie
@Ombre Party
Hey! So... I have an idea that involves Tigerkit, Nightmare, Maplepaw, and Wispbreeze. Heres my idea;

Nightmare decides to lay low for a while, and Tigerkit grows up, listening to any and all of Wispbreeze's advice she may give as a mother. Maplepaw and Tigerkit eventually fall in love (after, of course, Maplepaw and Tigerkit become warriors -- after growing up together). Maplepaw, now being a warrior, heads out on a hunt, and is killed or badly injured by Nightmare, and Tigerkit (now Tigerscar, as that is the warrior name I've decided for him) vows to get revenge. Several days later, he sneaks out, and fights and kills Nightmare, while also being pretty badly injured himself.

So what do you guys think? Good or naw?

I think it is VAB-O-LUS! (sorry for late reply ive been so busy since school started). By the time he has (or doesnt) have kits, i'm thinking of moving Wispbreeze into the positon of a elder (which I will probably have her die shortly after) Another position to break Tigerkit(scar)?